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for The Proud Green Bet (take 2)

by FireSpark

person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funniest fucking thing ever.
person blacknoise
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Best. Crackfic. EVER.

I was in paroxysms the whole time. You totally have a gift for the glib and the cracky.
person protogirl
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg this is too funny...but I wish I could see more Gailee crack goodnes though XD

still interesting pairings and just too funny for words!!!!!

nice job btw

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person NeoMT will never log in..
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright. I guess I enjoyed it even though it put my faourite man into a subjective light by his peers and elder. Maito Gai deserves so much better though... not saying stuff about the pairing.
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was...transcendantly funny.

I've just gotten into the fandom and have yet to see some of the characters (Tsunade) presented, but this was recommended, and I couldn't resist, and I don't regret it! The cunnilingus part of was so beyond hilarious. And then "LEE!" Oh, my God, so great.
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally read lots but this was really good.

FREAKING AWESOME STORY OMIG OMIG!!!

MORE!


Oh yes, and to reply to your comment on my ALISHA story? It is in erotica/sex because in the further chapters thats the category it lies under. I have my whole story (in bits n pieces of course) all scattered in my head...and I didn't want to change the category...so suck it up and be patient for the sex stuff :P

Thanks for posting, i can't add anymore chapters until they take their damn hold off..grr...
person Dark Phoenix
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! I will never forget the part where Tsunade's genjutsu gets cancelled. LOL!
person Amy-sama
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I laughed and giggled through the whole thing. It is nice to see some fan-fic with humor. Great way to stay IC. Write some more just for the laughs. I know I'll read them!
person agent m
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Lee!!"


HAHAHA!!!! I KNEW IT!!! XD
person Catullus
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Genius. Really. This fic is both hysterical and hot. (Is it wrong that I have dirty thoughts about Gai-sensei?) I don't usually read het- but a pairing with Gai? That proved too tempting, thank god you didn't let me down. Really you deserve way more reviews than you've gotten. It's those shallow NaruSasu shippers, they don't appreciate anything else. Anyway, I think my favorite line (one of many) was the "I wanna Rocks!" Priceless, truely priceless. My roommate wanted to know what the hell I was laughing so hard at- but there wasn't a good explanation for the nonNaruto fan. She may think I'm a freak- but it was worth it.