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for The Proud Green Bet (take 2)

by FireSpark

person Kitty Kat
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was UNBELIEVABLY great!!! I laughed...I cried...and then I laughed even harder!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! I especially love the fact that you keep this centered around the adult characters, it's a change from all those other Naruto fics, I love the jounins and Tsunade! ^^
person Redwyrm
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good!
person Diane
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh it's been a while since I have laughed that much, I was howling in front of my computer, just a chance I didn't read it by night cause the neighbours would have just killed me!
I had such a great time reading it!
My first big laugh was poor Tsunade without her genjutsu.
The second one was when Gai opened the Gates just to finish Tsunade. Poor Gai, now he xertainly will train his tongue!
Third laugh was when he cried out Lee's name!
I had so many tears in my eyes I couldn't read any more! My jaw is killing me from too many laughs.
Thank you so much!
(I don't usually read het, but the summary was attracting and I really don't regret it one second!)