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for This wasn't in the contract...

by ZiriOkamiotoko

person Chelsey
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAA!!! I can believe how awesome it is!! I'm so glad you updated, please do so again without delay. I can't wait for more smutty goodness.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Ruka
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was soooooooo hot! PLease write more !!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Katy
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bows down in worship* Finally, someone else has arrived to help dilute the ridiculous amounts of yaoi in the Naruto fandom. And even better, it stars Sakura!! Two pleas: make your chapters longer and update faster!!!! OF course, I'm the last person ever to talk about either of those things...so...I hope real life (1) inspires you to write amazingly long chapters of hetero smut (yay) and (2) leaves you alone enough so that you can update semi-regularly (regularly as in bi-weekly, not annually =P). Anyway, great chapters, keep writing, I'm eagerly awaiting for Sakura's moments with Kiba and Neji (hoping that will give you a push/hint/whatever in the next direction). I'm actually hoping you will include flashback scenes (not just dialogue recall) of what exactly happened and how each boy got hooked into the Sakura-fest. Three cheers for semi-plot-driven smut...yeeessss....
person duckie
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
X3333

I LUFF!!!

Gangbang, w00t!

I thought it would just be the more "designated" characters...I AM SO HAPPY YOU INCLUDED GAARA.

I hope he gets some luff.

I like where this is going. <.<;;

Update, please! <3333
person Finality
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, again. :D It's your favourite little stalker! Thank you for *finally* updating. <3 You must add a SasuSaku. Soon! If you don't, I'll bother you more.

.... Kidding. XD

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person Finality
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but half of my reviews always magically disappear. o_o The rest: "If you don't update, I will bother you more. ... Kidding."

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person Anti Fanfic
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Double XDs for you.
person PRoyalAngel
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THERE TOO MANY! EVERY FANGIRLS DREAM!.................Lucky bitch.............sniff.....sniff....hehehe. Sakura is pimping. heheheheh. ^__^
person cac
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes it was a tremendous shock and joy.

Lovely lovely, shower worthy, but come on, no yaoi? I mean, if its not your thing then stil;l, couldn't just like mentiuon it? Cause while an orgy with a bunch of guys is a great secret fntasy - how much energy can a girl have? I really suggest, give the guys somthing to do while Sakura takes on two at the most four guys...
person Marya
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, plotless smut. Me like!! ^_^