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for This wasn't in the contract...

by ZiriOkamiotoko

person Chelsey
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You seriously HAVE to go on with this! I'm dying to know what the hell happened the night before.
Please update?!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person BlueKanji
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dang, really interesting! You left it at a cliffhanger... no!! Please update soon. I want to know why Sakura had so many guys in her room. :) Pretty interesting/good.
BlueKanji
person Firered
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I for one certainly wouldn't mind if you continued this...
person SN
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very amusing~ *chuckles*

I've read some of those stories you mentioned and I really just scratch my head at them. It's one thing if they were well done IC PWP, it'd be fine, but...

Thank goodness you came along. :)
person Chelsey
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO ON GO ON!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what the hell happened! You made all the boys sound so sexy, very nice touch! Update soon!

-Chelsey-AKA: HisBeautiful
person sakura-fan
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so what next , or exactly how did it happend?
person malice-chan
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so you end it right there?!?!!!!! ahhh i want more i am sorry but oh every guy it seems in naruto it freakin hot and i like sakura so yeah *drools* i want moreeeeeeeeeeee! please and thank youuuuu
person Tsuki Ame
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah...please update? ^_^ I love it very much, I'm all for Sakura/many male pairings. And you're using of course all of the favorite males. They're all in character, I commend you for the effort, it's no easy feat unless you're so far obsessed with Naruto (like all hardcore anime fans) that you can just rattle their personalities off in seconds. No grammer/spelling mistakes, or any I could catch, it's flawless. Though that's probably just my opinion ~_~. I think I'm too far gone into your plotline to really check. Ah *offers a plate of lemon squares* I really do love it, already it's one of my favorites. Please update? It would be much appreciated.

~Lilllia ^_^
person AmberEyes
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still the yaoi fangirl got to squee over many nekkid smexy boys. ^^ This made me chuckle. I enjoyed it muchly.
person lina
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so hillarious!