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by eardell

schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nosebleed...That was so sweet and lemony. It was like read/eating a lemon drop. Very good. Keep them coming. I really like the way the fic was set up. I like the daloge.
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, it was very very nice. You dragged out the sex scene for a perfect amount of time. Niiiice. Hehehe, well great job for your first. Rock Lee is my life, and I'm obsessed, it really helps when I read stories like these. He's so gaddamn sexy.
person protogirl
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love this! God....it's really hot >_< arg....wait...did I review...already? O_o;;;

well if I did sorry >_< and if I didn't I loved this and wish you can make more gailee goodness! love how you ploted everything as well as the lemon...nicely done!
person protogirl
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn this was hoooot! Honesty...favorite gai/lee besides the long series arc...which name leaves me right now...

wish you can make more...the lemon was really detailed and nicely done ^_^
person NMT
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
5/5... oh my gawd! I kept faltering in my determinatuion to finish reading this, but you're writing and the fact that it's Gai/Lee kept me going on! You might be asking why I read it if it somehow bothered me right? I love Gai and I love Lee— especially in yaoi pairings, but I get this weird feeling of incest sometimes... but damn you story was HAWT and emoptional as only Gai and Lee can be!
person Lover of Green Beasts
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::blood rockets out of nose, mixing with a large pool of drool:: I, have been SERACHING for this! A plotless lemon that was too sexy to pass up, about the two beautiful green beasts of Konoha.......YOSH!!! I loved it!! Good good good!! I loved it!!
person that was...
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
INCREDIBLE!!
person inuyashman
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...

it was good but why ORAL sex??

well good job anyway
person Wendy
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great!

You have a gift in writing, that's for sure! I don't know how you do it but you describe everything so vividly!
Please keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more from you!

Love,
Wendy
person Koneko
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, man, talk about something that gives you shivers and hold you to the story all the time.
GAWD, I love those Lee/Gai stories.
You should try pairing Gai/Kakashi/Kurenai or Anko together in a hot 3some next time.
I loved your story! Great work!