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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it. I thought the flow was fine. There were a few rough spots, but that's to be expected for a new writer. Don't be discouraged and keep up the good work!! Oh... and what does Kakashi do? Is that for another chapter?
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story!! Way to go. Keep up the good work!!! Ohhh and please write more! I wanna know what Kakashi does.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trust me, I love Gai and Lee together, but I have to admit that this was really hard to read. Formatting, grammar, spelling, the flow... nothing felt even. There wasn't a real pace in the writing, and that made it extremely hard to read. It's really hard to get into.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!...thank you so much for writing this...I loved it! I've never read GaiLee smut that was this unbelievably good!!
I thought it was a finely written story!! I really got into it!....you did an excellent job on this.
I thought it was a finely written story!! I really got into it!....you did an excellent job on this.