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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, I loved it, the part where they are fighting and kissing is hot! I like it rough xD (reading of course, not talking about real experience xD) I love the last part, it's so sweet!
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy hotness, batman! That was awesome! I had a total grin on my face by the time I was done. I mean...those two would so mix violence and sex, but not in that bad freaky way. And gay ninjas are as cool as gay cowboys. Seriously. Awesome.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o-o awesome
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm, crazy ass naruto and sasuke relationship, and i mean that in a good way. how old are they by the way? like the way you wrote it, would like to read more on how this relationship develops.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for that to be your first sex scene, that was pretty hot! i like how the boys were fighting and then kissing and fighting some more...i dunno. i think violence sometimes adds to the passion. (maybe it's just me?) anyways...is this a one-shot, or are you planning on turning this into a multi-chaptered story? i think it'd be cool to see how those two interact now that they've had sex. but either way, this was great!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love NaruSasu! For a frist one, it was very good. Way better than the first one I ever wrote. I really liked the fighting, since I don't believe those two would give into each other without throwing a punch or two. It was kind of short, but I liked it anyway, especially at the end.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh that was really really good and really hot. yummmmeh. keep up the good work.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot. I like that their love making is like a fight. I can actually imagine it compared to the completely submissive Naruto other right. I can't imagine him giving in that easily. I also imagine the positions would be give and take between those two. Great story.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written for a first lemon. The characters were kept in character as well.
I'm looking forward to your next work/update.
I'm looking forward to your next work/update.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done -- I enjoyed it a lot! It was a bit "choppy" and seemed rushed in a few places, but I liked the idea of those two expressing their feelings and getting together (no pun intended, I assure you) during/after/because of a fight. But overall it was quite good!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!