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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person Vague
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person mel
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I am really liking this story. I have to know though, are you pairing Sakura with Gaara or Kankuro? or possibly both? I like Sakura/Gaara myself. Update again soon. Good job.
person Paintedbutterfly
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have loved reading your story, its been fun.. just one problem... chapters are too short!!! ;) hehe Keep up the good work.
person Cesia
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just love this so far! I read all 10 chapters in one sitting. XD It's just too awsome. I wonder what'll happen now. hehe, I can only imagine...that is, until the next update.^o^
person orchidee
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Gaara, put your goard in your room!"

ROFL

you rule. :D
person Lore
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and I hope you will post your next chapter soon!
person Breath
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Tosses celebratory confetti and squeals with fangirl joy*
You Updated! Huzzah!
*confetti is still raining down*
I was so disappointed when there were no recient updates (I feared this story abandoned and left for dead).
First off, Yay! You and your story are not dead. Secondly, I love your portrayal of Gaara in this, very sweet, very believable. And thirdly, I really like the way your story flows, it's an easy and very enjoyable piece to read.
Keep up the good work.
person Sam
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ack!!! You can't just leave it like that come on!!! where is the rest!!! PLEASE update!!! SOOONNNNNNN! I'm loving this story
person shattered919
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i laughed SO bad when i read the part where gaara cried! wow that was ........weird. but funny. i cant read anymore that was just too weird. its just so ungaara-like although your probably right about him liking romance movies. id bet that even in the show he'd secretly like them cause they showed what he wished he could feel. lol funny funny stuff. ;)
person shattered919
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the characters act real OUT of character it bugs me. try to fix that instead of making them all 'oh happy happy wonderful world' bullshit it freaks me out. -_-