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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person Lorien
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AWESOME! What are the pairings tho? I was hoping for TemSas SakKan and Narugaa....but if not ill live. This is a truly awesome story! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
person Whispers in the Wind
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Eye twitches* You WILL be finishing this, yes? If not then bad things will happen to you. *Eye twitches again* You are not allowed to leave off with a cliff-hanger like this. *Voice goes into 'Goddess' mode* WRITE MORE!

*bows* *Leaves offering of Jolt cola and chocolate*
person Ehwinn
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waw... Heh, it's really really good!
The beginning was already interessant, but now, it's great!!! I love your writing.... it's a bit sad, but I like the way it comes... and the characters too!
Please, update soon, I'm waiting for the next chapters, and I'm very impatient!!!!!
Your Gaara is terrific, I love him this way!!!! And Naruto too!!!
person The Empress
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argghhh! Evil Cliffhanger! Curses!! Anyways, I love the story and I can't wait till you update. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next. =) Please email me when you update. ;)
person alisha
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-9 review

You!!!!! You.....I....grrrrrrrrrr...You......sick.....meany :'( No fair leaving it as a clif hanger!!! GAAAAAAA!!! I wanna know what happens!! Gaara hurt everybody noooooo, but its okay they all will still love him, hope he doesn't beat himself up too bad :(:(. Go Naruto! Naruto can fix it by being himself...poor Gaara though.

Oh and well you write well.....errr I'll tell you how good a writer you are after you update again....*cough* so if you want praise update soon...*cough*(As if me begging so hard for more isn't praise enough ne? :P)

~alisha
person Kaichi
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed what I did get to read... I wish you would update. None the less it was very good and kept my attention far longer than any other fic. Which is why I'm not getting any rest until you update.
person Goldbryn
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! I love this fic...I have it faved and check on it regularly to see if it has been updated!! Sorry no reviews till now...I've been busy!! ::huggles:: You write to wonderfully! I love what you're doing with this and I can't express my overwhelming JOY for the portrayal of the Sand Sibling family. It's so nice and believable! I LOVE KANKURO!! and Gaara...WOOT!!! I cannot wait to see how all this culminates...and I pray to the kamis that Kankuro is alright! He is alright, right? RIGHT!?!?!? ::sobs::
Great job! Keep it up! I can't WAIT to see more loverly chapters!! ::glomp::
person Kai
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MISSED YOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!
*HUGFEST* MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!!!!
I WAS IN SEATTLE, I'M SOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XOYXOYXOYXOY
LOVE YA!!!!!
Kai
person Leasan
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Your fic is really interesting and hilarious at some points. ifferent from al thel fics I've ever read.
I really like it, this "bitter-sweet symphony".
I love Gaara, he's just sooo sweet, really adorable. Make him happy some time, ok?Please?
He really, really deserves that.
I'm really curious about pairing. I'm for SasuNaru (but in your fic Sasuke is rather out of character, too easygoing for my liking, but people change :) or NaruGaara- that'd be adorable.
Update ASAP! And yeah, the longer chapters the better :)
person Arryelle
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KOll very happy but it's so sad and angsty poor gaara and his inner demons that are gulit something tells me the raccoon had nothing to do with that laspe of control on gaara's part.
Oh I hope you don't let kanky wanky die it would be a crying shame tear. well update soon it was great sad but great. oh have fun in canada!!!

Loves Arry