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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person Mehla Seraphim
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow very dramatic here. Wonder what caused Gaara to freak out like that.
person Jadejj
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my what's going to happen next will everyone be okay?
person HisBeautiful
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You left us hanging!!!! NOOOOO! what the hell happened??? Update soon or face a public flogging.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay updates lol. That was so good poor Gaara. I think I always say that lol. I'm so out of it.
person xgirlrogue
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! what was that - noooo - no gaanaru - that pairing really annoys me because I see them as friends and nothng else - that and the fact that naruto is so glaringly hetro that it's sad - sasuke I think could go either way but naruto is way to into women - just like ero-senin

but this was a nice chappie- and yea!!! some gaasaku action! whee I was soo happy I love that pairing - I just think of how much her patience could be of use to someone like gaara - I think it's wasted on sasuke
person Chelsey
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tell me!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!! Update soon


Wootens!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Arryelle
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad yet cute I was hoping that gaara and salura get together but him and naruto work too but with you. you just don't know which is cool keeps me on my toes
And even though I'm the sex goddess I love in when one sets it up for the lemon to happen and not rush into it very cool. well update soon

Loves Arry
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.

So sad, poor Gaara. So does he end up with Sakura or Naruto?

Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
person blisblop
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice..Saskura tried
person blisblop
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.The interaction is interesting.What was with Tamari and her getting dressed that morning.I think something went over my head,sasuke told her it was healthy or ? to get moving and while she was getting ready she put her PJ's back on and asked sasuke to leave(I think)