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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person HisBeautiful
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! "Love is in the air!!!" *laughs* Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person xgirlrogue
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh.. maybe I'll get a little gaasaku lurve soon - wink wink - anyway this was a nice transition chapter - soon gaara might not like sakura sleeping with kankuro hehe also the toast thing with him was really funny - snicker, a growing boy needs his food

I like how sasuke also felt homesick without the 'comforts' of kohona around and let himself relax for once it seems like

also tenmari seems like she needs a little lovin' as well - maybe now the konoha tri can work over her ex- as well lol
person empyreal
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this fic so far. The small interplays between the characters is nice. Sasuke changing is always great (= I was a bit confused by teh Temari/Sasuke action, she was undressing but suddenly got self-conscious? You do a very nice job writing the characters, keeping them in-character while also showing how they may've developed over the years. Look forward to seeing more (=
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoooooo......Gaara and romance! Whatever shall we do? ^___~ Thanks for the update -- I can't wait for the next chapter!!! And don't worry, I'm sure you'll be able to come up with the details for the fic (as well as where it should go) as you write it. The outline is the most important thing.....the rest can write itself! Besides, you're doing fine so far........ ^____~ Keep up the good work!!!
person saika-chan
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really a great story and really interesting...i love the way you express the love between the groups as in sibling sort of love..lol.. gaara is soooo adorable, just wanna hug and squash him..ahem!! yeah, anyways i love how this is going and i hope that you will continue this and please do update soon, keep up the great work lol...and may i request a sakura and gaara pairing they go so great together ^_^ bye...
person Kai
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AM SO SO SO SORRY ABOUT NOT REVIEWING CHAP. 5, I WASN'T ALLOWED ON THE COMPUTER!!!!
*hugfest* PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME IT'S GONNA BE GAANARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!!!! XOXOXOX
Kai
person xgirlrogue
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! no! kankuro can't "get with" Sakura - it ruins all of my gaa/saku dreams
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, lol.

Keep up the great work, coolsa.
person HisBeautiful
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Update soon! poor Sakura, I liked the chapter, but poor Sakura.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person XGIRLROGUE
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.. poor Gaara! hehehe you can't kill Naruto - yet! but now him and Sakura need to switch rooms so she and Gaara can be together - that and Kankuro's a dirty pervert! also I want gaara to get a little love! he's so cute
love it so far keep updating frequently