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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person Mehla Seraphim
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was odd lol. I woulda though Sakura and Sasuke would have choosen the other way around, cause it would make more sense and less ackwardness lol. Lol Poor Gaara. I hate it when people snore too...>_>
person Jadejj
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh dear I don't know who has it worse right now... :P
person xgirlrogue
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story - espically the racoon part! That was really very funny. and did I detect a hint of gaara/sakura? yea! that is my opinion of the best pairing besides kaka/saku- please update sooner
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo you updated ^^. I likes it alot. Lol. Poor Temari. But yay revenge. Lol Racoon.
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clearing things up It helped. But Gai and lee that works perfectly I love it. and I assume there will be many great ones in the near future and you do update fast unlike some people who take months. lol
Update soon it getting great can't wait to here the sleeping arrangements.

Loves arry
person Lady D
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaara and Sakura hugged. ::turns up happy hopeful eyes::
The GaaSaku fan in me loves you for even that much.

Cute so far.
person akuma_river
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.

It looks like it is going to be a Kankuro/Sakura, Sasuke/Temari, Gaara/Naruto story, isn't it?

Interesting.

Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person Chelsey
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RACOON! *snort laughter tear* God that was great! (I just sounded like Tony the Tiger) anywho- can't wait for the next chappie! That was so funny! update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Jadejj
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story so far what's next for the two teams :D
person Kai
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! HUGGLES!!!! *hugfest* ^_^
Heheheh.......Gaara is a raccoon, although I think he looks more like a panda! Nya!
Keep up the great writing!!
LOVE YA!!! MWAH!!
Kai