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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi ano.. I'm a new reviewer but is this going to be any lemons
good plot though
Arry
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo that was a good chapter. >_>...was it Shikamaru that broke Temari's heart? Anyways Yay for character growth ^^. Great chapter.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Go you!!! ^^ I really liked this chapter -- more character development, an intriguingly vague comment, and a "cliffhanger" of an ending.......I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work and update ASAP, kk? Ja ne!!!
person ectweak2004
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH OOH OOH!!! I know who performed that song...

but I don't count, because I'm a slave to the author... (not that that's a bad thing)
person defangel
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey love the story, can't wait to find out the pairings, your keeping me in suspence here. Oh! and the answer is dum! dum! dum! Korn - no way from the issues album. see you next chapter.
person Kai
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XOYXOYXOY!!!!! YAY!!!!! It makes it more fun to review when the author thanks me!!!
*huggle* Keep up the good work, girl!
Love ya!
Kai
person akuma_river
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, but are they really that weak? Why didn't they bring heavier materials?

I didn't think it would take 3 days for them to get to sand, when in the recent chapters of the manga, it shows making it within some hours...

Oh well. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person ddd anti Yaoiist
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pliz can you make it NaruTema
person Kai
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XOXOXOXOXOXOY (Y=GLOMP ^^)YXOYXOYXOYXO
THANK YOU!!!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR A FIC LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!GAANARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!!!
Kai
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! OMG, I love this fic -- very kewl idea, and quite well done!!! ^^ I can't wait to see where you take this, not to mention which pairings you choose. Also, it's nice to finaly see a fic where the peoples' *is too lazy to type out their names, lol* relationships have "matured" as much as they have. *winks in Naru-kun's direction* It's nice to see Gaara acting "human" for once......... ^___^ Keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!