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for What we will do for our villages ...

by eardell

person YuriKuro
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOOL...Hilarious...the beginning of the second chapter with Lee and Sakura was soo funny!!^^
AND...YEH!!I wanna to know too!! Where are they gonna sleep? héhé
Really great!! Bravo!!
Can't wait to know who's gonna end up with whom!!
Well, anyway...keep the good work, you're awsome!!
See ya
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo great chapter. You seem to update fast. So extra yays. And thank god you don't have Sakura so lusty for Sasuke. I like her much better that way. Plus man people rip into her faster that way.

The cute semi dysfunctional family moments are amusing. And ooo sleeping arrangements.

Ah yeah there's so many fics with the exchange, but I think your's is the best so far. It seems like it's one of the few ways to get both teams together. Ever read Keys to Diplomacy? That's a goood read. And a valid way of hookin people up. >_>..smutty yet valid.

Anywho. I love this fic I hope to see more soon ^-^.
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo you must write more. For a second there I thought this was a fic I've read before. So many start out with the exchange program. But yours already seems far more in depth, thought out and well written. And *le~gasp* they are in character. I do hope you write more soon. That was so sweet with the hugging. I'm interested to see who you pair with who.

I like surprises.
person akuma_river
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
anoo... who r the M/M pairings? is 1 of'em GaaNaru? ^^
person Jadej.j.
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not a bad start let's see where it leads then
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWoooOooo...Interesting!! Can't wait for chapy 2!!!^_^
Bring some more fast!!!

See ya
person ectweak2004
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that's good! You need a beta though, some of the grammar and spelling needs work.

hmmm... where can you find a beta? oh... heh, that's right. I AM a beta!

if you want, I can edit your future chapters for you.

I do have experience in Editing Fanfictions, and Fansubs. (I'm still trying to work with #DB on Naruto)