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for Strip Tease

by theyaoifairie

person Anon
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i still love this more than words can say.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I was laughing before I even got through the disclaimer. Funny, funny sh*t.
person anon
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is still one of the funniest stories I've ever read. It totally makes my day. I always crack up when Sasuke can't think of anything to do with his arm things and then Naruto goes to make tea while Sasuke undoes his leg wrappings. Cheeky bastard
person Sheena_X_Zelos
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh!!! That was very amusing!! XD I never did read about a strip tease before but that was very entertaining. I can only imagine what it could have looked like but hey, you did a good job with this!! XD Kudos to you! XD
person Neko-Chan
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! too tired for sex XDDDD
person TenshiKaitou
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gwahahahaha, can't tell much for myself, but I got a feeling you're going to get brick or something akin to that for stopping the fic at the climax!!! Anyway, nice laugh!
person me aka. Ari
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao i loved it!
person Hellagoddess
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *dies from laughing* That was AWESOME! *grin* Really quite amusng!

Keep up the good work...oh..and i lurved your disclaimer...had to read it twice cause it was just so great! lmao

Hellagoddess ^_^ v
person Hotaru
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickering* that's so cute, and you're right it's better if you picture it all in your head. I never really thought about the clothes that the boys wear but then I've never written any shounen ai for Naruto... yet >_> you give me mental pictures that must be written down...
person Whispers in the Wind
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snerks*

Doesn't 'real life' suck?

*eyes cross from giggling insainly* >.< Meheheeheheheeheheheheheeee!

Well done

*leaves offering of jolt cola and chocolate*


"Wanna sleep?"
"Sure."