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for Strip Tease

by theyaoifairie

person sexiie--panda
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You..are...the...BEST! This is soo strangley abstract in the sense that it's missing my favourite element of some down riite dirty yaoi, buh it made me laff so much! So very very much. Your skills at cracked up stories makes me keep on readinng. Honestly this is like the first non yaoi fic i've read in the longest time=D
person Nya-san
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That..was great. Everyone usually just goes 'ok so uhm, shirts, pants, and boxers are off so now that can have hot sex, right?' xDDD Even me. But. Still.

Iloffyou. =P
person dinkscythe
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* yeah, well, got a point there! the killer had to be when sasuke sits down to start unwinding his bandages, and naruto just has to go to the kitchen to make some tea. *lol*
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i read it again...AND IT STILL MAKES ME CRACK UP LAUGHING!!!!! thrust his hips a lot...tangoed to the bed...OH MY!!! yeah...i just had to comment again how funny this is...so yeah...d(^-^)b
person lil\'wystynyra
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rofl
omfg i love it
i was reading it, and going... its too short for smut, but there arent any other chaps...
then that end
omg, rofl.
the strip tease is for the author not them ^^
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!
person Taylor
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHHOA! WAS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE COMICAL?! (If not I am SOO sorry)
Well it was to me! The imagery I recieved was (akwardly) amusing. When you said Sasuke hurled his sandal at Naruto, I was imagining it actually hitting Naruto. (do I sound like a totally idiot right now? I think I do) But, this was, like, really cool. I laughed alot. Keep it up! ^_~
person Nishtiman
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. Made me smile because I'm a big SasuNaru/NaruSasu fan.
person Mask of time
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LAMO!!!!!!!! I love this. Its funny as hell! Now if only there was a lemony sequle? :Drool:
person -
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs really hard* Wow lol. I've never really laughed so hard because of a fic that doesn't state itself to be a comedy lol. That was interesting lol. hahaha went to get tea in the middle of a strip session lol. So funny lmao If they actually really did that in the anime-timeline, I can see both of them killing each other 0.o lol Freakin hilarious :P