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for Strip Tease

by theyaoifairie

person DeadUchiha
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!!! I LOVE IT!!!! This is very splendid indeed!!! I really did laugh my ass off! Great discription! I didn't notice any mistakes, but i was laughing pretty hard. Anyway, yeah! This little *Ahem* Strip tease, was very cute! I just wonder how the boys could have managed to do such a funny thing and not laugh their own asses off...hahaha...well...guess that's it then! Are you going to continue or is this a one shot? I think it would work either way. Hope to see more from you!
person baka neko
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha! that was really funny...especially picturing sasuke doing something like that. cuz, ya know, he's sasuke afterall. but that was a really cute fic.
person Imseniorbagofcrap
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHA! It's when realism gets the better of us all! Like licking honey of each other will leave one person sticky and the other in a diabetic coma!
person Jadejj
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe good points in what both teens wear :P
person blisblop
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sobs,but there are no flaws I can catch.You are just gonna have to settle for a job well done ,my dear.The idea is very amusing,very whimsicle and actually seems like something two guys would do.Threw their shoes at each other.Snort.