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for Inside Out

by theyaoifairie

person rocielsama
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF mate, ah well. Weird but still quite funny. *hands you a nicely toasted, but not burnt bagle in reward*
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are on crack! damn hilarious fic, although I won`t be able to look at a bakery for quite som while now without getting thoroughly disturbed.
-_-

person Meyme
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What are you talking about? That was THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ. Don't ever do anything like that again. EVER.
person Whispers in the Wind
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Oh my god...

That was warped, disturbing and utterly mind-numbingly derranged.

I absolutely loved it

That has to be one of the best crack fictions I have had the pleasure of reading in a LONG time.

*leaves offerings of chocolate and jolt cola*

"It's what's inside that counts"
person ???
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Its so funny! Nice symbolisms too! I enjoyed it so much, thanks! People should make and read more of these types of stories don't you think?
person lstdpnthght
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the funniest thing I've ever read. I thank you.
person DeadUchiha
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Please review! I know this fic is downright awful, so go ahead and flame!!! I will bask in the warm attention! Just as long as I do not become burnt and undesirable like poor Kogepan."
Seriously, what the fuck are you talking about!?! I love this fic more than sliced bread!!! Unless...it is bread that has been sliced open...and had the gooy insides sucked out... by the ever so tempting and desirable lips of one: Uchiha, Sasuke......................I like 'em burnt on the inside! ANGST! PAIN! *devoures pain* GIMME MORE! MORE DAMN IT! MORE! OH! OH MY! Where did that come from?!? O.O
GAH! I gotta go...I hope my little ramble made you chuckle! XD
*uses her ripped-off Uchiha flame thrower to smother you with it's warm glowing warming glow* Kukukukuku! *sparkly eyes* ~Dead
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao. That is *so* cracktastic.
person sexiie--panda
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was hot.....lmaoo made me laff soo damn much! I've never hever heard of that burnt toast before-.- hell i ccan't even remember its nammee! This was funii and sooo very odd. I hope the jam was strawberry, strawberry tastes soo good=D Anyways, this was so funnii it made me hungri tooo-.- thanks alot. Now i'm gonna starvee to deatth the kitchesn to far.. lol just kidding^^ I liked this soo much for some very odd and strange reasons^^ Good work, i just went from craziie laughter to psycho laughter, and its all thanks to you=)
person Anvil
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, that was brilliant/