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by onesickmind

person Anon
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that last line it made me laugh oput loud for 5 minutes~
ThX!~
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your deleted scenes had me cracking up hysterically the entire time. Especially the bit about Sakura and Itachi. hehehe. Keep up the good work. I think every story should have little bonus dvd extras like this. ^^
person kaiden
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your one sick mind!!!
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep going. keep going. keep going
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've gotta say, "and then Kakashi threw aside the cage and raped them all" has got to be the best ending ever. good job :D
person sadistickiss
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... well that's just hot now isn't it?

The Sakura thing was a turn off though =_='' you're right about her. Her existence is not necessary~! (ahh... I'm so mean T_T I'm sorry!) Well, apart from that this was a super hot, super hilarious, super well-written fic *love*.
person XPitchforkRedx
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The sex scenes were incredibly hot, and the deleted scenes were hysterical, especially the ending! xD So perfect.
person Natasha
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS HALARIOUS!!!! Please keep on goin, dont stop. I was soooooo enjoying myself~!!! This was great, keep goin!!! ^^
I think this was GREAT!!!!! ^^

Luv, Lucious
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! LOVED the deleted scenes!!! XD
"God damn it... no matter what Sasuke did to fight back, Naruto always seemed to get him in the end." yeah baby... NaruSasu all the way!!!! Show the SasuNaru fans who's the bitch in that pairing!!! XD *mad cackling*

I want more of this yumminess! :3
Much love,
Psylocke
person kyuubigirl
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this was too much. You are too funny... and the mutual raping was still hot despite your cheekiness. Fun! MORE