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OMG!!!! i loved it! i can't wait to read the next one!

Awesome job, and I think that your writting style is fine. Update soon please. :)

... I'd of gone for Asashi. (Or Tequila.)

Hehe, I can't wait to see a pissed Gai. And Neji.
Isn't Lee a supposed drinking tensai? I could be wrong...

UPDATE SOON. Muah haha!

ahh..so you're continuing afterall. that would be cool. i'll wait on for more 'action'.

and don't mind me being a busybody, i went to read the 'mean review'. heh, i think it's just some small misunderstanding in-between. to speak the truth, i was a little turned off when i first read your quota for reviews. and yes, it would be better for us writers to be modest. but maybe you are just not well in expressing that particular message, that the reviewer misunderstood and took offence. however, i do have to say that she was wrong too in the way ran down you and your writing. well, just ignore that and don't think too much about it. For us to post on fanfics, there always ought to be chances to meet unpleasant reviews. I understood your indignance at being commented like that, but as Kikumaru from POT said, "Don't mind, don't mind." ^___^

Cuute. I have to admit i didn't exactly like the quota thing, buh hey, whatever floats your boat. Hope you keep on writing

um...ooooook...0_o yay for kakashi!

That rule is something Kakashi-sensei would come up with!! *Snorts as old memory of sleepover comes into his head* You could have them play the game of kiss and seek! In the game everyone wears blindfold except for one person and they're all give a number that they have to be. The person in charge of the game calls out two numbers and those two have to stand and try to find each other without saying anything and once they've found each other they have to kiss until the person in charge or the one person not wearing a blindfold tells them to stop. If you back down fron doing it-for whatever reason- you have to lick whip cream off of the person you chose not to kiss. It's a really fun game. really-^_^really^_^really^_^FUN!! At the end of the game everyone tells everyone else their number and if it turns out that you kissed someone you really like you're supposidly going to get together with that person. It didn't work for me, but-who knows!? It CAN happen, right?! Right... *sniff* Other than that suggestion, I'd like to say that your story is very intesting, it needs to be longer and have more detail, but other than that-sweet!!

hahah i wanna know wat happens next! great fanfic! better than i could ever do :stare:

I think that last part was funny! I hope you write more. As for things to do at a sleep over... well... there could be truth or dare, the girls banding together and playing tricks on the boys, the boys putting make-up on the girls while the girls sleep. And of course, they all could try to see what Kakashi's face looks like. I hope you write more soon!

please continue. but make sure kakashi is in it cause hes one sexy biotch.