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for An Important Rule

by Concha

person Terry
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'M REVIEWING! Man you have all of the main characters over there. Have them play "I never" "Truth or Dare" "Seven Minutes in Heaven" Get Kakashi drunk! But most importantly, update. :D
person DancingKitsune
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, that's an interesting twist. "No making out unless I'm involved" xD I kinda feel bad fer the hormone-crazed Sasuke and Naruto, lol I'm guessing that the two will prolly try and get around that rule.. Heh, and it'd be interesting if someone found out about them ::snicker::

Second grade was the last time you went on a Sleepover? Dang, I've been to atleast 5...[my bday in 4th grade, my cousins bday in 6th grade, and a few in the last two months as get togethers with friends (near 9th grade)] Well, I've gotta tell ya something. The video games and movies will never go away. lol Most of the time, a sleepover with teens will be something like this:

- Horror movie
- Video Games [or cards]
- Drinking game [soda/apple cider with underage. Go fer the cider!!! xD]
- Spin the bottle
- Truth or dare [have someone ask ether Naruto or Sasuke to make out with the other xD]
- Another horror movie
- Tv/chatting/drawing till dawn fer those who don't sleep as much

Yeah....At least that's what the majority of sleepovers I've been to went like. Around the "Tv-chatting-drawing till dawn" area most people are asleep already, so the remaining people will usually group off and do whatever they feel like in their limitations. That's about how sleepovers go now-a-days.
person Sukara
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kakaka. xD I laughed so much, I am hyper. xD Continue Continue!!! xD But keep it SasuNaru!!!!

Ideas..hmm....It would be fun for Kakashi to try anf flirt with Naruto and then a jealous Sasuke comes and protects him and whatnot xD Kakaka, my tastes are wired. xD
person Kyouta
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaah, that's so cute! >w< Kakashi would TOTALLY make up a rule like that--silly ero-sensei! PLEASE CONTINUE!
person WynterMajik
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great, so I definatly want you to continue writting. I'll think about some ideas for the sleepover and then e-mail you, or leave another review with them. :) Amazing job and good luck with the ideas.
person blueinferno
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...they could play truth or dare? *evil grin* and sakura would have to snog kakashi!!! YAY and then itachi bursts threw the door and whines saying "i wanna play!" hehe thats kinda nutty...but its funny so i would have done it *cough* anways yeah! truth or dare....LOVING ur fic btw lol
person Kai
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about spin the bottle? a classic
please write more ^^
person sasu-san
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!!! yeah that rule really fits Kakashi!! Well write more and hopefully kakairu. Ja!
person Trek
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aa, you may continue, coz it's weird having write this just to tell Sasuke and Naruto are at Kakash'is house and cannot make out, all the rest of the story must have something to do. So, for me, it cannot be a one-shot. I don't really know how are sleepovers but you could make some kinky games like truth and dare, hide and seek, horror stories, find you soulmate by the odor (blinfold) with a lot of yaoi and girls bashing (for every game). It's all I can suggest. Good luck!
person Jewel
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe!!!
Wow... Kakashi's a pervert, but that's nothing we didn't know, right? I truely wish I was in his place, although I'd invite over a friend to take care of the girls...
Hmmm... last sleep over I had, we ended up dividing up into groups, watching movies, playing games, and eating. Although more than one person ended up with whipped cream in thier face ^_^'
Of course, with Naruto there, he would just have to pull a prank. With me, we had one girl fill a paper plate with whipped cream and then called another girl not clued into the prank into the room to get something for us, since she was probably the only one who could reach it. When she got splattered by the person hiding with the whipped cream plate behind the pool table, it resulted in a chase (she was trying to get whipped cream onto the one who got her first) and both of them eventually tripping over eachother... see where this is going? I sure hope so.
Keep writing!