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for Unexpected Relations

by Harass

person oohshiny
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT and should by NO MEANS be pissed on my constipated, filthy sheep, not even a black one. i hope you update quickly, im anxious to see who the hell she is, and why she has a cloak, seeing as shes an uchiha, as well..... email me when you update, please!! ^^ my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok.so who is that girl?
person InHuman Lover
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it you need to add more chapter so i knw what happens next
person DarkRan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope next chaps will be as great as the starting has be. Please, continue writing like this!
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going there. This is a good start, if you hadn't said anything about this being your first fic, I wouldn't have known.
person Danya
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start..... Im interested to see what else happens :D

Please continue
person kaze
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting start, you've got me interested ^_^ I did see a few grammar flaws, but nothing too bad. I'm interested to see where you take this!
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you have my attention. Kudos.

Oubliette
person silverfox
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting first chapter keep up the good work and update soon can;t wait to read what happens next
person MeLaiya
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so what happens next, c'mon. you gonna update, pleae update