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for Downward Spiral

by ceruleus

person Angel
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Where's the rest pretty please?

Beautiful start! You could take this any which way, what with Homura, Neji, as perhaps further antagonists and Sasuke! Oh Sasuke, sniffles and his Dobe!!!

BTW - Naruto mired in his sleep? I couldn't work out what mired meant in this case and wonder if it's a typo.

Really can't wait for the update, poor Sasuke!
person phamtonsnow
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story
person Imagy
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEE
love eet!
I totaly want to see what Naruto's reaction will be
and how the M/Preg will fit in
I always find that part facinating
plus, this story has deeper characters than I've seen in a while
it should prove to be most interesting
so I can't wait~!
'til then, hun ^^
person SiriaBlack-RedDRagon
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That´s a unique idea you know.I like it^^
Let me guess Naru-chan will be totally freaked out
person SiriaBlack-RedDRagon
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That´s a unique idea you know.I like it^^
Let me guess Naru-chan will be totally freaked out
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It'll be funny seeing Naruto with a fat belly! Hope to see more soon!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naru-chan! DON'T LET HIM DIE! I really like this story if you can't tell. Please update soon!
person lonelylulaby
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh this next chappie is probably going to be sad. i bet'cha naruto's probably pregnant when he goes on the mission with the other 2 ninja. wonder who the volunteers are going to be. i liked the chappies so far and can't wait for the next one

ja ne till next time

p.s keep up the good work
person Pepp
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What'd he do?! What'd he do?! What'd he do?! Eeeeee!!!!! Poor Naru0chan!!!! *grabs crying Naru-chan* *pats him on head* There there! I'm sure Sasuke-Teme will see he's just being one of the dumbest smart persons on the planet!

*glares at sulking Sasuke-Teme*

lol

I like the story so far! That old Geezer dude needs to leave the kawaii couple alone! He shoulda kept his nose out of the whole thing! And SASUKE-teme needs to drag his hot, pale ass back to Naru-chan and beg for forgiveness!! *cackles evilly, while glomping on sniffling Naru-chan* lol
person losthimagain
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O! T_T! Poor Naru-chan! That's the problem with these two! They NEVER talk to eachother about what really matters! Please update soon!