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for Downward Spiral

by ceruleus

person Shingo the Pest
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been hoping, hoping to see the second chapter of this fic, and you completely made my day! ^___^ And the lemon made things twice as awesome. Is Sasuke leaving Konoha? And will you get more into the history of Arashi and Homura's son, and how Naruto was born?
person jomo123
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update as soon as you can
person jojo
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow amzing stuff and like the darkish things in the story u rock and keep writin
person Starwind
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic so far and can't wait to read more!
person lo
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. This seems like it will be a tear jerker. Keep up the good work.
person yaoigurl91
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue to write and update this seems like it will be a great stiry! update soon and ill give you a cookie!
person selim
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a great story, please update when you can!
person loveless
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg you have to update soon pleaze with a cherry on top!
person Neko-Chan
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginnings!!! Cant wait for more!!!
person X3
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg continnue! plz i'm begging you *kneels*