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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! This is fuuuun!!! lol. Nice. I want more threesome please! XD
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've entered her challenge too? Good luck!
I like this fic, it's a bit rushed, but I like it! the pairing is awesome! there isn't many who thought of that ((yet)), nice and original.
You can keep on writing this fic, I would consider it a waste if you didn'y, since you started it so good...! ^^v
hana-chan
I like this fic, it's a bit rushed, but I like it! the pairing is awesome! there isn't many who thought of that ((yet)), nice and original.
You can keep on writing this fic, I would consider it a waste if you didn'y, since you started it so good...! ^^v
hana-chan
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, for you're first attempt at slash, that was pretty great. Yeah, well, a bunch of people entered that contest, me being one of them, and believe you me, there was a lot of crap that i've found. I think you did a dandy job! my hat is of to you! if you want to, read mine and tell me what you think!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was fun. Is it just a oneshot or do you plan on turning it into a chapter thing? If you decide to, I'd definately be interested in reading it. hint hint wink wink =~.^=
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did very good for your first time writing slash!! I hope to read more, I'm hoping that this story will continue. I haven't seen any NarutoxShino fics and only a couple NarutoxKiba fics. You really left it open for more at the end, plus Naruto now has that fun new jetsu that he can have all kinds of fun with!!!XD
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! *squeals* you made shino cute!! i just wanted to hug him when he blushed. i would love to see a naruxshino sequel to this. (hint hint) anyway, cool fic. definitely not who i was expecting, which is good as long as there is no lee involved. *shudders* he's a cool character but his eyebrows freak me out. >__<
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! That was fun! Sniffing Kiba rules!! ^_^
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I was wondering at your portrayal of Shino as submissive, but your reasoning does make sense. It was well written and fun to read. :)
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this was pretty cool. It's not a top-notch story, but there's sex!!! (dances and YAY) Also, the lack of angst/plot is really refreshing. Eleven brownie points!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... You managed to write an appealing Shino. Usually the whole bug thing just squigs me out, but he was kinda cute here. Very good work especially as a first for writing slash. No half measures for you, straight to threesome. ^^ <3 Anyways, I really enjoyed it.