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I like your story a lot.. Great plot... Sorry I didnt review in your last chapters... I'll give you this to make up for it ^.^ ~Gives authour a baby Naruto pluushii~
Update soon

Anna-chan,

You're my most favourite authour...This is the best story I have ever read*_* I luv baby Naruto and baby Choji~ *presents Annachan with flowers and cookies*

I am sure you know what I think about Kanky/Sasu, but just in case you don't NOOOO! Ok, now that is out of the way, Kanky doesn't want to think that he likes guys, but he wants the female Sasuke, I can't see Sasuke staying a female for him, he also just wants a fling. Well, I am definitely anticipating the outcome of this little bout of flirting, and how will Naru react if they do go for it?! Too many speculations...my head hurts! Well, no amount of begging on my part will change your plan, but that is what is good about reading someone else's work, seeing their inner thoughts. Patiently waiting.

I always wondered why they announce the name of their jutsus before using them - in most anime, not just Naruto. Seems to me it's more for the benefit of the audience than anything. After all, isn't it like warning your opponent what's about to happen? Seems like that would be a disadvantage in a battle with an opponent who was familiar with the attack. Like yelling out "I'm about to kick you with my left foot!" before you do so - they'd know what you planned, and block accordingly.

This started out on a humorous note, but you have really added some meat to the plot, good job. I have a question, in chap. 10, you had Kanky say something like he doesn't swing that way, meaning he is not into guys, or crossdressing? It could have meant something else entirely, I suppose, just wondering. Are we going to get a deeper look into Kanky, after all it is his brother they are after, he seems to just be hanging out and taking up space, or is he just biding his time until his particular skill is needed? Anyway, I geuss when the battle gets underway we will see all of his brutal Kankyness boil over!! Great progression.

I must say you have me at a loss, but I persist in my firm belief that Sasu and Naru are soulmates!!! Ok, well as for Kanky,hmmm, well, Choji does need someone, but is Kanky the man for the job?! It would be a first for me, but I would sooo love to see you try it. Anyway, I'll keep reading even if you dash my hopes. Good update.

Complex,smooth,just really interesting.So different.Sasu is doing well,they are all really.Brave of you to go for the adult baby thing.Very.

OK you've definitely got me hooked. So update, update, update, please.

Awwww, that's so cute! =) I hope this is Sasuke/Naruto or anything besides Kankuro/Sasuke

I am glad they are on their way, and I caught the bone about Sasuke's pairing!! I like the idea of Itachi being sick as the reason for the massacre, I hope it works out for Sasu, it would be good to get his brother back. Not enough fics approach Itachi this way, I like him and always like the redemption angle.