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person Serenia
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'I wish I was an Uchiha' - how adorable!
person yaoilover
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter is up! It's starting to get interesting; I love GaaSasu pairings, and Kankurou x Sasuke is definitely a new one.
person ChealseaRorec
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! You updated^ ^ You finally updated^ ^ Its so, so adorable...One question though, Are you seriously pairing Sasuke and Kankurou together?? @_@
Well, Keep up the good work. By the way, great chapter. I cant wait to read the next chapter^ ^ Baby Naruto is so,so cute^ ^
person ChealseaR
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!! This is my most fav story ever^ ^ Its so sweet and cute.. I loved how you made chouji and Naruto into adorable litle babies and Neji and Sasuke into beautiful women...You just made my die..I laughed a lot in your story..It was great and humourous^ ^ PLease update soon~~ I luv your story^ ^
person vashta
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chap, I was wondering how Ino got pregnant, are you going to tell us. Are we going to have a Sasu/Naru? I hope, because I don't like Kanky/Sasu. Well, keep the funnies coming.
person vashta
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I knew you had it in you, I can just imagine Sasu and Kanky swearing off children forever after this mission. Well, I am ready for more, I am really enjoying this, I was hesitant at first but I am glad I started reading this. You have managed to come up with something new amidst all of the overdone plot lines, hey, I laughed outloud!
person vashta
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find this extremely funny! I am soo ready to see Sas taking care of Naru, are there going to be any new pairings in here? I hope so, it is too good to pass up. I hope Naruto is the kind of child that makes parents jump for joy when nap time arrives.
person Serenia
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story - it's good to see this jutsu has a practical application too! (Sorry for not reviewing earlier, my mother came from interstate for a few days, so I've barely been at my computer)
One thing I wasn't sure about was when Sasuke was introduced as Sasuru-kun. Wouldn't it be Sasuru-san, since she's now female? I could be wrong, though.
I liked the little battle I perceived between Sasuke and Neji to be the more beautiful woman.