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person Hellagoddess
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"It isn’t called the ‘I’m pissed and cross dressing Jutsu’.” Neji said"

Ohmygod this completely cracked me up! lol! Only up to the second chapter and i already love it!

Hella
person marielle
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhhh... Hiashi-sama getting hitched?!?! You ol' Dog, you!

I love Koibito... I need to start that fan club too!

The cramps Sasuke are having,.. I'm assuming labor is a chapter away?!? Oh dear oh Me... if that happens... one of the babies is going to be pretty small...


Great chapter again, Anna!
person Serenia
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you and a Happy New Year! *hugs*
person vashta
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chap, and I am glad you cleared up the Itachi question. I didn't want Ita to get pregnant he doesn't seem to want to. Well, two down and one to go.
person Marielle
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Gaara-kun and the kiddies are alright!


Great chapter! Loved the name you made for Neji and Shika's baby. Is this baby gonna receive the seal.. I really hope not...

And the title for the next seems interesting...


What old guy could you be talking about?
person marielle
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*screams*


Yes!!!

Now that we know that Gaara is having twins, I assume the second will be a girl?

And with the second being a girl, I'm assuming, due to the complications (Naruto did say that there were problems with the second baby) that she will probably be the smallest... and have traces of Shukaku in her? I mean, I know it says that it attaches to the boy, but she was there with him...
person vashta
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad Neji had a girl, poor Shika, he is gonna have his hands full in about 14 years when all those teenage hormones kick in! Well, I thought Lee would have a rougher time with Gai's new relationship. I have a question, I may be confused, but doesn't Itachi still have girly innards? Didn't the sealing jutsu that Naru had on Sasu to keep the first baby alive still affect Ita? I thought that was what the talk a few chapters back was about? If so couldn't Ita have gotten pregnant, or would he have had to be full blown female? I may have misinterpreted the chapter, so I am asking. Well, I hope Gaara's second baby is ok, and a girl. I really hate cliffhangers, but you are entitled because this is a great fic.
person Serenia
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that was one of the better first-time scenes I've ever read!

I'm so excited to see the babies.
person BloodAndChocolate
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* labor! yay! go Neji! go Gaara! I hope you update the next chapter REALLY soon! ^O^
person vashta
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned that you are my favorite author?! I knew you could pull off an exceptionally good Ita/Gai, or Gai/Ita, pairing. I am so happy, does happy dance slightly similar to chicken dance. Well, what is wrong with Gaara's baby, I must know! On another note, I am thouroughly impressed with how domesticated Genma has become. I mean he is almost like one of those diaper bag totin' daddies, my hubby never would, so I am envious. I am sated for the moment, but I will need more Ita/Gai snuggles eventually. Now it is time to get on with birthin' them babies!