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person marielle
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaara's having twins... I know it! A boy and a girl. If he has a girl, he is going to spoil her to death!

The lemon was awesome...


And Neji's having his baby!! Yay!!
person Marielle
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!



Too cute. I love Koibito more and more every time.


He's my future... I know it!

I hope everything tunrs out well for him. I think it'd be interesting to add a bit where the Oro babies accidentally meet up at some point or another. I mean, they all intend to become ninja at some point, right? You htink you'd incoporate that within your stories?


Any ways... your President is back...

Can't wait to see this Itachi/Gai Lemon...
person vashta
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Surely, you did not deny me a lemon???!!! Please, tell me you didn't, I think I will become increasingly despondent if you did. I am very happy though that they at least have taken a step in that direction. Well, the whole "Dobe" thing was funny, poor Naru. This was a nice chap, I like way you let them get on each others nerves like a real family would, poor Itachi he needs a good long cuddle. You go Gai!
person vashta
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tell ya, Itachi gets no privacy around those two! I am so happy, please don't make me wait countless numbers of chaps for more Gai/Ita fluff. So, what is up with Gaa, do we find out next? Well, I hope Sasu doesn't go all mother hen on Itachi over Gai, Gai is just too cute.
person Serenia
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I rather like the Itachi/Gai!
I can't help thinking Konoha is having a huge baby boom right now. Seems everyone is having them!
person vashta
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"His brother and her lover"!!! Boy, Itachi is really befuddled by his attraction to Gai! I am soooo happy, I just know that Itachi and Gai are going to be one of my favorite pairings, and I can't wait for more. I had a friend whose daddy made turtle soup all of time when we were kids, I never knew that little tidbit of information. I remember going with them to check his turtle traps, well, you learn something new everyday! Why would you want to start a new part? If it is just going to be a continuation, I personally don't think it matters, unless there is some taboo or unwritten authors code that I am unaware of! Well, whatever you decide I am here to stay, so keep up the good work.
person vashta
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have never seen this pairing before!!! I am sooooo stoked, but please before the lemon let Itachi drop the jutsu, I really would like for him to be a man for that. I don't have a problem with the whole idea of playing girl, but I really want to see them together in their true forms. Now, maybe Itachi can help Gai out of the fashion limbo he is in, oh you are wonderful. Surely Sasu isn't going to cut Naru off, I mean 9 months is a long time. I like the direction of this, it just gets better and better.
person vashta
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Itachi, he needs a lovey! I will not speculate, but you know what I am thinking!!! So, Sasu is ready finally, I can't wait, and Neji is too funny. I can remember my hubby making fried balogna sandwiches at midnight, yeah I am gross! Well, ready for more. Oh, me thinks Gai is lonesome!
person Marielle
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Dare I say...


Do I see a GAI and ITACHI hook up coming?!?!


Oooooooooohhhhhhhh man.... This is gonna be interesting as hell...

Keep going... I need to know this...




*sits in a corner and waits...*
person Marielle
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Gai/Itachi lemon?!?!?



Oh, the possibilities...

I'm not that big of a writer, when it comes to fanfiction... but... I think I might want to give this a try...

Poor Itachi... so Gender Confused...


He just need's a Youthful Explosion of Love!

Gaara puchy Meneji buttons... oh this will be great...CLASSIC...