rate_review Reviews

Well it starts interesting. Too early to build an objective opinion.

i love temaXshika pairing XD for an initial chapter, i like it already ^_^ please update as soon as you can!

update!

hi....i'm a big ShikaTema fan, and i wanna thank u for writing a story dedicated to this pairing. please update soon. i'm not familiar with aff.net's update alert, but if you've updated, can u mail me? thanks. keep writing and i want more ShikaTema lovin'?

Love,
a new fan,
ardenilia

Mm ... how odd, I somehow overlooked this story in the past. Oh well. I think it's too early for an honest review, since there wasn't that much plot to begin with, but I'm sure you'll get to that eventually. The pairing is everyones (yeah, optimism) favourite couple, your writing style is really fluent and it pretty much fits the picture of the original story. Good job so far :)

And thanks for your review. I'd like to point out that you might want to post this story up in the Het-section too. It's a shame to be overlooked since there aren't that much ShikaTema fics out there anyways. Just leave an E-mail when you update if it's not too much trouble, I'd really appreciate it. I'd hate to miss the next chapter.

Write more! ;)

it's good! you should keep going!

FUCK YEAH I LUV THIS SOOOOOO MUCCCCCHHHHH!!!! man i wonder whats gonna happen??? and i DO love Tem/Shika pairings its a CLASSIC BABY!!

O.O! well all i can say isso far so good man

This is looking good. I really like the pairing, Shika/Temari. So keep the good writing-spirit up!!

Oh yeah...I see...writing on this instead of my story...uh-huh...whatever!! ^_~
Just messing.
This is awesome. I look forward to more. I will say my fave part was kankurou and his puppet...and temari's comment about gaara's teddy bear.
Very well written^_^
LOVE YOUS!!!!!
Now write my story...or more on RaaHP...PWEASE!?!?!?! ::puppy dog eyes...pout::