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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I was worried at first that she was pregnant because of Kabuto's experiment, then I remembered that they had to be virgins which left Ino way out. I hope you had a good b-day, great chap, does Genma get to be her hero? I like the way you are taking your time, PXP is good but a good plot is better, and I like there to be substance behind declaration of love, well if they don't just let lust rule first. Nobody just falls at first sight I don't care what anyone says.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting really good and into it. Sorry about my last review, i read it over and I understand what you were talking about now. CAn't wait for the next chapter!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the snack, but I;m still on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter. It was cruel leaving us like this!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the tissue! ^^ And for the fast update. really there is nothing I hate more than to wait for an eternity to read the next chapter! ANd Im so honoured that I inspire you! *blushes*
AndI loved this chapter as well! I like how you find ways for them to meet eachother, without rushing things!
I can't wait for the next update!
Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! (okay I know it's a little early, but still.... ^^')
AndI loved this chapter as well! I like how you find ways for them to meet eachother, without rushing things!
I can't wait for the next update!
Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! (okay I know it's a little early, but still.... ^^')
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so kawaii!! Ino has the baby bug and so does Genma, I know your thinking "Why does she say that?" Call it woman's intuition. Ok, I looked at your profile and started in on the Fruits Basket's, you got me when you mentioned Kaiba, he is my absolute favorite Yu-Gi-Oh guy, I watch it just for him, really. This fic is really good, I am glad Iruka and Kaka got a baby, Iruka would be a great parent. Happy B-day, mine was last week, I am a scorpio too, no wonder I like you!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol yes I've watched the series, and you are soooo right!
But in your case, it's the strongest point of your story. (besides the story itself that is) Anyways, I loved this chapter to bits! I mean it has sooooo many emotions running through! I especially love the way you kinda described Genma's past! You made it come soo alive! I could actually feel his pain, and loneliness!
I just can't tell in words what I mean, just that you should keep up this wonderfull piece of work!
Ja ne!
Ruka
But in your case, it's the strongest point of your story. (besides the story itself that is) Anyways, I loved this chapter to bits! I mean it has sooooo many emotions running through! I especially love the way you kinda described Genma's past! You made it come soo alive! I could actually feel his pain, and loneliness!
I just can't tell in words what I mean, just that you should keep up this wonderfull piece of work!
Ja ne!
Ruka
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAH! You are a horrible person, you have hooked me on another one! Well, I have decided that after Kakashi and Sasuke, Genma is my third favorite moody ninja. Although, nobody beats Kakashi for sex appeal, Genma is pretty cool. I had to go back and look through the manga for Genma snippetts, just for reference of course. I hope we get a little uplifting update after the sadness. Patiently waiting, and I am very interested in your FURUBA, but not the Yu-Gi-Oh, Yugi irritates me. Until next chap!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me. I decided to read this after fighting my curiosity for days. I don't like Ino, but I like this story, I have never seen Genma paired with anyone but Raido, at least not in a major way. I suppose I like her more than Sakura, so I approve. I believe you have kept her true to character, I can so see her turn out like this. The only females I really like are Ten Ten and Hinata, the rest are twits, but Ino is very "I take what I want and don't care what you think!" I may have a new appreciation for her after this, well, I am ready for some good old Ino/Gen action!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it to bits! I can't wait for the next part. ANd again, I love how you take your time with them. You dont rush them into a relationship like is done in soooo many other stories! I mean, this just makes it all the more realistic!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im not usually compelled to read Ino fics but i was this time and i was not disappointed to say the least!
very well written and a great fic
i cant wait for more
very well written and a great fic
i cant wait for more