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for Ino Blink of the Eye

by wherdatcomfrom

person vashta
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I was worried at first that she was pregnant because of Kabuto's experiment, then I remembered that they had to be virgins which left Ino way out. I hope you had a good b-day, great chap, does Genma get to be her hero? I like the way you are taking your time, PXP is good but a good plot is better, and I like there to be substance behind declaration of love, well if they don't just let lust rule first. Nobody just falls at first sight I don't care what anyone says.
person reya
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting really good and into it. Sorry about my last review, i read it over and I understand what you were talking about now. CAn't wait for the next chapter!
person Ruka
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the snack, but I;m still on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter. It was cruel leaving us like this!
person Ruka
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the tissue! ^^ And for the fast update. really there is nothing I hate more than to wait for an eternity to read the next chapter! ANd Im so honoured that I inspire you! *blushes*

AndI loved this chapter as well! I like how you find ways for them to meet eachother, without rushing things!
I can't wait for the next update!

Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! (okay I know it's a little early, but still.... ^^')
person vashta
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so kawaii!! Ino has the baby bug and so does Genma, I know your thinking "Why does she say that?" Call it woman's intuition. Ok, I looked at your profile and started in on the Fruits Basket's, you got me when you mentioned Kaiba, he is my absolute favorite Yu-Gi-Oh guy, I watch it just for him, really. This fic is really good, I am glad Iruka and Kaka got a baby, Iruka would be a great parent. Happy B-day, mine was last week, I am a scorpio too, no wonder I like you!
person Ruka
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol yes I've watched the series, and you are soooo right!
But in your case, it's the strongest point of your story. (besides the story itself that is) Anyways, I loved this chapter to bits! I mean it has sooooo many emotions running through! I especially love the way you kinda described Genma's past! You made it come soo alive! I could actually feel his pain, and loneliness!

I just can't tell in words what I mean, just that you should keep up this wonderfull piece of work!

Ja ne!
Ruka
person vashta
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAH! You are a horrible person, you have hooked me on another one! Well, I have decided that after Kakashi and Sasuke, Genma is my third favorite moody ninja. Although, nobody beats Kakashi for sex appeal, Genma is pretty cool. I had to go back and look through the manga for Genma snippetts, just for reference of course. I hope we get a little uplifting update after the sadness. Patiently waiting, and I am very interested in your FURUBA, but not the Yu-Gi-Oh, Yugi irritates me. Until next chap!
person vashta
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me. I decided to read this after fighting my curiosity for days. I don't like Ino, but I like this story, I have never seen Genma paired with anyone but Raido, at least not in a major way. I suppose I like her more than Sakura, so I approve. I believe you have kept her true to character, I can so see her turn out like this. The only females I really like are Ten Ten and Hinata, the rest are twits, but Ino is very "I take what I want and don't care what you think!" I may have a new appreciation for her after this, well, I am ready for some good old Ino/Gen action!
person Ruka
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it to bits! I can't wait for the next part. ANd again, I love how you take your time with them. You dont rush them into a relationship like is done in soooo many other stories! I mean, this just makes it all the more realistic!

Please update soon!
person krickets
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im not usually compelled to read Ino fics but i was this time and i was not disappointed to say the least!
very well written and a great fic
i cant wait for more