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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn you still havent updated well hopefully you will have updated before the new year
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for you to update i realy like how you use difreant points of view
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why o why havent you updated yet please update a.s.a.p. this story is realy great please update
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon great begining
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i mean this is great please update soon
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story but dont you think you made us whait long enuff yet please update and sorry i dint revew the last time i read your story it realy got great potential
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make sure its naru oc! dont let ur made up charcter go 2 any1 else!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the exact same chapter
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Don’t switch between POV unless you know how to use them effectively.