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for XXX Kitchen Sink

by LazyNinjaLuvr

schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh! the lemon was hot, no question!!!
But Gai is such a freak!!!! lol KUDOS!
person NeoMT
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>.> Erm... yeah that was hot, but did I read right? Gai's going to join them or not... and this is also finished? *mopes* I liked it.
person Hestia
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! The dildo scroll scene is so funny!!
person jIma
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loave this fic yo!!
teh gai parts are frikin hellariois XD
keep it up!
person gwingangel
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD
OMG shannon! i'm not the only one with a dirty mind! haha!
sorry had to get that out. besides that, the fic is going great. naughty sex with an old man watching. ewww gai go away! >_<
great job shannon. keep up the good work. =3
person darkninja
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you shannon thats was so freaking good!! *uber hugs* i love it soooo much!! ands the bit about gai was totally sweet and random. totaly awseome!
person sin
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahaha this is AWSOME!!! plz update again asap~!!
person lanier
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awe that was so cute... well after the attack that is. That attack was hystarical. Poor Lee... heh heh
person Whiskas
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok............................what was up with the whole ten-ten firing off a bunch of sex toys? O.O;
person Shoya
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i laughed so hard at chap 3. My mom ame downstairs becaus she thought I was crying. Oh man that was hilarious, I love this fic and I can't wait til you update!