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by Rian

person Mike
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great one. Didn't narrow it to attempting to add every sexual possibility and instead developed a good background for the story. I love Naruto as the dominant. Too rare really, and you definately did it justice.
person Tinzuli
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I liked this...Nothing can defeat smut.. *mwhah* unless smut with plot in it..:D I was first banging my head onto the computer screen because Sasuke's OOCness, but in the end it was good..and I liked Naruto being better at something than Sasuke! And virgin-Sasuke! *laughs* I normally don't like Sakura being involved with Sasuke and Naruto having sex, but sometimes I can forgive her.. ;P and this was worth reading.. And it was sweet, Naruto humiliating Sasuke because of what he did to Sakura...*damn you Sasuke for having weird revenges..*
Hey, is this still going to continue or..? I was kinda hoping more yaoi-style.. ^______^
person blisblop
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent.Those boot contraptions sound wild.Relatively realistic.wild.Too much female equals slut bullshit but not eveyone is emancipated.
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one of the best naruto fics i have ever read . continue this story
person Iris
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just had to take the time to say I love your Inner Sakura. I really, really do. Good stuff. Onto the next chapter.
person licorice
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write exceptionally well, and you're right, there aren't enough team 7 threesome fic's around
person Yukizora
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect, the best threesome I've read in ages!(The only threesome I've read in three months but that ain't the point). Update soon! I'm looking VERY forward to the next chapter! Hopefully I don't tip over the edge!^^
person Chia-bride
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! This story was the bomb write more soon please. I mean you got skills
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully Erotic. You have major talent.
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fabulous. you have to you have to you have to pleaaaaaaasee write more!