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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMg... Narusasu is the best! You rock!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far and well written. Love it and look forward to more.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so good! Keep writing or... I'll kill this stufed bunny!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story this far, so keep going with the next chapter. I really like your style of writing and the way you describe both character, so continue your good job!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is soooooo goood!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! Love the plot! More! I crave more!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The other reviews that didnt like it can go suck a fuck, I think this has everything a great story needs, and it's AU people, that means its not cookie cutter NARUTO. She has the right, and ability to change whatever she wants.
So in closing, if you dont like the story, you're a big stupid.
So in closing, if you dont like the story, you're a big stupid.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I love the omakes. Hilarious! ^_~
The only problem I have with this chapter is that Sasuke seemed almost a little too ungrateful for all that Naruto's done for him. And Naruto almost sounded like he really, really wants Sasuke to work for him, despite all the insults and unappreciation Sasuke was giving. Sasuke, even though he was pretty much raised rich and proud, should at least show a little gratitude.
But otherwise, the fic is fine the way it is. ^^ I hope you update soon.
The only problem I have with this chapter is that Sasuke seemed almost a little too ungrateful for all that Naruto's done for him. And Naruto almost sounded like he really, really wants Sasuke to work for him, despite all the insults and unappreciation Sasuke was giving. Sasuke, even though he was pretty much raised rich and proud, should at least show a little gratitude.
But otherwise, the fic is fine the way it is. ^^ I hope you update soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I figured that the second chapter would clear some things up. But please don't update just to respond to reviews...
Anyway if YaoiLover is the same yaoilover from here http://www.livejournal.com/community/ff_anbu/51887.html#cutid1
then she can't talk.
Anyway if YaoiLover is the same yaoilover from here http://www.livejournal.com/community/ff_anbu/51887.html#cutid1
then she can't talk.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...long debates in the review board. very, very, very, very interesting. i guess i agree with yaoilover12 that review boards are no place for other reviewers to bash another one just for their opinions. it's one thing to disagree, but some people take it too far. and a person should be able to post without fear of getting attacked by a writer's rabid horde of fans. regarding the story itself: i don't really care for AU, but i didn't mind this one. i've seen worse, and this is one of the better ones out there. but even though i disagree with yaoilover12, i'm not going to try to bash him/her. that's just rude, since it's obvious their constructive criticism was used by macy, and may even make the fic better. which is more than i can say for some people. macy, not bad btw. i love narusasu. i just hope naruto isn't too much older than sasuke, since i'm too used to seeing them in the same age group (but i think it's kewl to have naruto be older).