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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this concept, and I've read it with many different pairings. GaaNaru is uniquely... erotic, however.
Your story progresses very nicely, the plot is excellent, and it carries on decently. I like the entire thing.
Two thumbs and two big toes up!
Your story progresses very nicely, the plot is excellent, and it carries on decently. I like the entire thing.
Two thumbs and two big toes up!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, I think that GaaNaru is the greatest, allbeit tragic couple.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;o; Excellent, yet at the same time it's so sad! I love the style of writing you used, and personally I didn't feel that Naruto in any way, shape, or form was out of character. Great job!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sad...
I really like it though...
You should have it with no povs and continue onwards...
I really like it though...
You should have it with no povs and continue onwards...