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by kimbop

person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this a Sakura/Sai story or Sasuke/Sakura? (Please let it be Sai/Sakura!!!!) PLEASE!!! I think you broke my heart when you made Sakura say Sasuke's name after kissing Sai instead. *cries*
person ArishaGinkaze
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww! poor Sai. I feel kinda bad for him. So far your the best I've seen at writing a relationship between Sakura and Sai. Maybe you should do another fic about them when you finish this one! Loved this chapter as usual. Just wanted to point out the it's Hyuuga not Hyuugi for future reference. Update soon!
person Aya
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH! This chapter was great!!! Aww... Sai's getting attached to Sakura and Sasuke is getting protective of Sakura!! Whee!!! This is awesome!! Can't wait for the next one!
person pippins_song
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't quicken it ;_; I like long stories XP

Anyhoos. OMGWTFBBQ! SAI KISSED BACK?! *LE GASP* I have to say, that was kinda hot. Keep writing! ^_^
person Hillary
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATEING!!!! I REALL LIKE THIS BUT I REALLY WANT MORE SAKURA/SAI LEMONEY-NESS!!!PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!
person keket
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I am looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder what Sasuke has in mind for him and Sakura's next bet battle. Keep up the good work!
person angelus2040
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah that is just wow, oh and Icha Icha means Come Come, I think, anyway keep up the good work and fight the good fight with more het fics!!
person jennjennr
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_o ... wow, I LOVE IT! that was great! the whole lemon, without actually having the characters have sex, genious! gosh that ero sannin is awsome, and his little books rock! this is by far the most entertaning fic i have ever read i can't wait till you continue, i love you!
person Hillary
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FREAKING GOD THAT WAS THE MOST EROTIC, EXOTIC, AND HYPNOTIC THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE! LOOK IM DROOLING IN ANTICIPATIN!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AND I WAS WONDERING IF THERE WAS GOING TO BE A LITTLE( HOPEFULLY ALOT ) OF SAKURA/SAI/SASUKE ACTION? THAT WOULD BE FIRE HOT!!!!!!!!!
person Me..
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lolz, you did great..... hehe

hey, I think you're also the one doing sesskag fanfics in inuyasha right? I love em too