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by kimbop

person No name for now
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story more and more after each chapter. That one was really funny. And you update so fast too!
person Kokiu
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gawd, I'm dying.

That...that was just grand. There are some obvious quirks to being Tsunade's disciples, and Sasuke got to witness one of them. xD

I'm really liking your development of Sai and Sakura's relationship. And I agree about his personality - underneath that false facade, he's most likely one intelligent bastard. ; ) Mm, and I'm perfectly content in wherever direction you chose this story to go.

Great job! (And don't let the lack of reviews here on AFF discourage you. >_> The HET stories here are forever doomed to be overshadowed by the yaoi.
person Nadia
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... awesome chappy, hope you update *smiles* soon please!
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF...AFF writers don't like you??? Well, here another review to make your day a little better. I really love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope to see more of Kakashi and Jiraiya.


PS. here a another drink all for you. ^_^
person pixie
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better stories I've read in a while ^_______^ Keep up the good work. Ja!
person jennjennr
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah! i love it and i love you! oh exciting how this is turning out i can't wait >_< i'm so sad i just read the new chapter, and now i want another one. i absolutly love your sense of humor, and your style of writing and characterization, espically sakura, its great. never stop writing, no matter what people say you have talant.
person Aya
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eee!! I love this story and this chaptered kicked ass!!! I absolutely loved it! And don't worry about the proper english. We really don't care (or at least I don't) if the comma are in the right place or what not. Just have fun righting this! ^__^ Let me say this again.. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! wo0t!
person Lady Moon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
since it was such a good chapter i will review it, and ask you to
PLEASE update as soon as possible!!!!!!
person GAO
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! I love you! Seriously, this story rocks. Sai's character is perfect, Sakura is incredible, and Sasuke's character is thoroughly enjoyable. You've also done a great job with the other characters - I'm totally thrilled you had a party to include them all in. If anything, I wish there had been more interaction during the party, but the Kakashi bits and the SaiSaku bits more than make up for the lost opportunity. I'm happy you're updating it rather quickly! Please continue to do so - I can't wait for the next chapter of Sakura's cunning scheme!
person jcnkitten
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chap and all the chaps before........this is a great story........i cant wait to see what happens next....ive really gotten into this story.....so i hope u update soon....reallly sooon!!!!