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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, your story is really funny and stuff! i love the way you are portraying sasuke cuz you just get his personality so close to what it really is. please update soon cuz i love it!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovin it, lovin itso so so much, but since aff offers more spaces for rec read i can check like daily
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LUB this chapter! LOTS of SasuSaku to read! And ignore those whiny yaoi fans who are mostly in their preteens (or still preserve the mentality thereof). SasuSaku RAWKS.
Actually, I though she was going to flash Sasuke, but that works as well.
Bringing him to the gossipmonger's... I really like how Sakura's mind works. Devious little devil girl. GO, Sakura-chan AKA Pinky and also Brain! XD
Well, Sai was less of a gay-ass whiny bitch in this chap... But I still hate him for calling Sakura ugly. I hope he gets permanently disfigured, the narcisstic little prick (heh).
One minor complaint: Naruto pushing Sasuke into the stairwell? Yaoi senses tingling.
Oh, and Kakashi is pretty much IC. Seemingly absentminded, devious manipulator who screws with people's minds. The bass ackwards account of the previous nights event was just SO him.
Hope to read more! And cross my fingers for a definite, happy SasuSaku ending. ;)
Actually, I though she was going to flash Sasuke, but that works as well.
Bringing him to the gossipmonger's... I really like how Sakura's mind works. Devious little devil girl. GO, Sakura-chan AKA Pinky and also Brain! XD
Well, Sai was less of a gay-ass whiny bitch in this chap... But I still hate him for calling Sakura ugly. I hope he gets permanently disfigured, the narcisstic little prick (heh).
One minor complaint: Naruto pushing Sasuke into the stairwell? Yaoi senses tingling.
Oh, and Kakashi is pretty much IC. Seemingly absentminded, devious manipulator who screws with people's minds. The bass ackwards account of the previous nights event was just SO him.
Hope to read more! And cross my fingers for a definite, happy SasuSaku ending. ;)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, ignore my earlier comment about the kid killing thing, that's just a minor nuisance in a sea of goodness. You receive a thousand bonus points and a giant gold star for using the word: 'gorgeousity'.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The bit about killing the kids (in the drinking with Neji chapter) sorta made me sad and seemed a bit off from the humorous tone of the rest of the story. I know their ninjas who are required to kill when ordered, but the series does often treat being a ninja with kid gloves (no good dies dying, etc) so that comment sorta stuck out for me. I'm not even sure if its something that I'd suggested changed or not... *shrug* It just a little thing that irked me and I thought I'd leave a note about it. (I'm off to read more of the fic now, heh).
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i soooo Outrageously love this story, please update soon and loads of inspiration to you!!!!!!
and by god i love your Sense of humor!!
and by god i love your Sense of humor!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha I was quite amused with the filler chapter. I love the Sai and Sasuke encounters! I must say, you write remarkably well when your drunk haha. Kinda reminds me of Lee. Update soon!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha loved it so funny. tha whole drunk thing, lol lee can't hold his liquor >_< love that bit. don't really care who sakura ends up with if anyone this story is just enjoyable no matter what. please continue.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy balls....i did love the bar scene and more of it woulda been fun too. I dont have any I want to see Sakura with___ statements because I can see it going anywhere at this point and whatever you come up with will rock anyways. Cant wait for the next chapter and more of the awesomeness that this story holds. keep up the good work and update soon!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter rocked! I love how you wrote in the flashback into the story. Your writing style is so cool!