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by kimbop

person Dark Phoenix
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whut? I thought you said at the beginning this was going to be a SasuSaku? Or did I remember wrong? *scratches head* Anyway, I'd be disappointed if things between Sakura and Sasuke stayed "Just Good Friends", or returned to where it was before. It's like, all that build up for NOTHING?!? And Sai is too bloody mean to be liked. Sakura gives him too much credit, what with him calling her ugly in her face, and praising his own appearance, ALL THE TIME. Gawd, I wouldn't just jab him, I'd slap him so hard his grandma feels it.
person krickets
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!
your so funny when your plastered!
lol i have yet to write fanfic while inebriated
but i think tonight is a good night to try.
thursday night= martini night

so this was a GREAT chapter
i love getting more in depth with the characters
and the jealous behavior is hilarious and well written

i liked it!
person Yaaru
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God damn. You, madam, are a genius. I can honestly say this has to be one of my favorite Naruto fanfics. Sakura is so fantastically characterized that I can't even describe how many times I've cracked up reading this. From what you've said, I've read as far in the manga as yourself, and I believe you've done a great job with Sai. Just...damn. Bravo! Now, I must go hide myself somewhere so I stop gushing like an idiot. 'Can't wait for more!
person fubuki
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg... hilarious yet again! LOL.... pinky and the brain................... ROFLMAO that really is similar, anyway, please update soon! gosh, this fic is friggen hilarious.!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Pinky and the Brain, Pinky and the Brain. One is a genius, the other's insane!" I'm the one who said it! Go me! XD I LUV that old cartoon! And Sakura (often being called Pinky in various other fics) was totally acting like an evil combination of the two both insane and genius)! XD

Woah. I can't believe Tsunade sent a thirteen year old Sakura into a place like that to get her sake. -_-; But yay! From now on, Sasuke escots her! Teehee!

Love all the primate chest-thumping show of masculinity in this chapter.

And poor "little Sakura"... still crying at being left behind. ;_;

And I still want to punch in Sai's face. He's vain, egotistical, and BLIND.

So more SasuSaku-ness. DIE, Sai! Eat dirt, you asshole!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...your story is gettin better and better! Please we need more Sakura/Sasuke. DON'T let this be Sai/Sakura fic. PLEASE!!!
person L-izzy
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love this fic, and seeing it's Saku/Sasuke ... there is no Sasuke. Or very little of him. I mean, if they are going to end up together in the end, why are you holding him at arms length? Bring him into the story more, please. So far, one will continue to think this is about Sai and her. Not the darkheaded dumbass. -_-;
Please, more Sasuke-kun. We beg you.
person Monkey Lady
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting a kick out of this fic. That part where you said Gai's thought process fell into the "skipping through a poppy field" category cracked me up. I'm glad I was alone because I couldn't help but laugh out loud at that all three times I read it. Very funny. I'm looking forward to more from this one. I'll be watching for it. :)
person Aya
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wo0t! Another great chapter! And you haven't read past Sai's enterance?! You sure fooled me! You are keeping him so in character that it's not even funny o-o; I can't wait for the next chapter! ^___^ Whee!!
person jennjennr
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love love love, please continue soon. what was that thing at the end, i wasn't sure who said the last line was it sakura or sai? just a little confused. but still my fave story :)