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for The Scheme

by kimbop

person Lizzy
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. good ending note there. Anyway, I too love Neji (he's the best naruto character if you ask me) and Sakura pairings, so when I saw you writing em as friends I actually started thinking "OMG kiss kiss kiss," until I remembered this is about Sasuke and her, not them lol.
I love how you use all the men characters into detail, and even Sai -who we don't know much about yet- gets a main role. But I am happy this is about the dark headed idiot (who we know will end up with her in the manga, or most likely).
In total agreement that Neji and Hinata shouldn't end up together, since when did sleeping with your first cousin become a hot thing? :O
Just ignore my rambling and keep it coming, I love it and so does many many others. This is a true beacon of light in the dark corner of M/F pairing section on AFF.
*WTF is up with all this M/M crap?!!?*
Lizzy
person Fubuki
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Sh*t..... This fic is just awsome. The way you made Sakura plot this scheme is absolutley... damn, no words to describe it but... WOW. I'm just wondering if you can make a SaiSaku fic . xP If you cant, thats fine xD but as for the pairing in here, you could make it a SaiSakuSasu fic. xPPP alright alright, SasuSaku pairng T,T xD anyway, love it. So much Humor in this fic it made me crack my ass off my chair. God, you are talented. Anyway, Loves x3
person no name for now
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She will get the chance to raise her legs up to Jesus and praise his name soon enough"???? Oh my god, that's the funniest thing I ever read. Yes I know it,s not part of the story but I had to mention it.

Yep, can't wait 'til next chapter. Sasuke-kun yay!
person Karista
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe you've managed to work Sai into a story already! And I must say, it's very well done...as far as I can tell, he's on-point as far as being in character. I love the assessment of his obsession with Naruto's penis...that part of the manga totally caught me off guard and you exploit it so well! I also love how well you've captured the spirit of all the characters, you write so close to the anime/manga that it flows perfectly. Keep it up, can't wait to see more!
person Aya
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! The next chapter of the story!!! ^__^ I sooooo can't wait for the next one!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was going to review this at the end but decided this line in chapter 2 just about killed me: "Jiraiya-sama was a smart man, and she was a smart woman. Together they would make porn magic". That was so wrong and yet so cool. XD
person Dark Phoenix
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That BASTARD took Sakura-chan's first kiss! Sai no YAROU!!!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just a last review to say:

Please update this soon! Deviosu little Sakura and a jealous Sasuke RAWK! XD
person Dark Phoenix
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... and I hope this eventually becomes an NC-17! *giggles and runs away like Kakashi reading porn*
person Lemon
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I love this fic! It's so good! People never give Sakura enough credit. Thanks for writing her character so well.