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by kimbop

person xdarkxflames74x
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of a good story. MAJOR MAJOR props.
=] Me likey very much. Update soon.
And oh yeah.

Is sakura gunna end up falling in love with Sai or something?
:: confuzzled ::

Ohwell

I don't like to leave reviews.

Ever.

Wayyyyy tooo lazy

So that obviously means your one hell of a writer to get a review from me.
Be proud.

Hurry up and update, i hate waiting.
=]

Take Care

<3 DaRK

person Aya
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wo0t! Another great chapter! I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next one!
person ArishaGinkaze
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really,honestly, truely adore your story. Not only is it smoothly written,but its captivating,humorus,thoughtful, and possibly one of the best pieces of work I've read on this site. I can't think of any improvements for this story. I can't wait for the future chapters so pleeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!!! :D
person Lily Draken
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, AWESOME! Keep updating! This new chapter was great! Can't wait to see me some SasuSaku. (But I like this whole SaiSaku thing too... very interesting, and props to you for making it work!)
person krickets
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i LOVE this story!
but you know if she MUST be with sasuke in this story maybe
write your next story with her being with Sai....that would be nice

ha ha but this is awsome!
but there are quite a few errors which look more like spell
check errors....where it just automatically
corrected it to somthing you didnt intend.
maybe think about turning your automatic spell check off.
person somenobody
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. please continue this. i'm a die-hard sasuke fan so it's little weird seeing sakura talk trash and sasuke not ignoring her or retorting back at her. still, love it all the same.
person LilyDraken
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Can't wait to see where it goes! Love the idea! Update soon...
person Aya
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story. I've been reading it everyday and I'm so glad that you're updating it everyday. It's the highlight of my day. Damn that bastard for groping her... maybe he should do it more often. ^^ Hmm I wonder what Sasuke-kun is going to do about his little kunoichi being touched by another man. Muwahha you are so evil!
person mynth
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you really update fast... keep that up~:D would this end up as sasusaku? tsk... sasuke is kinda boring nowadays... but that adds to the twist. why not make this a saisakusasu? that would be great.:D i really loved the idea of sai groping sakura.at least he was proved wrong when he calls her breasts as mosquito bites.XD


PS: I REALLY WANNA SEE THE ICHA ICHA VIOLENCE... SOON.XD >am addict of porn<
person avistirke
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... please make this a saisaku!! the saisaku fandom isn't really that notorious yet. please? it is more interesting to read it if sasuke isn't leading man.
let him be a supporting character that adds to the relationship of sai and sakura.