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for The Scheme

by kimbop

person ArishaGinkaze
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. It's very amusing and I cant wait to see how it prgresess. Update soon please!
person Besanii
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont really think it was out of character terribly...Some OOCness is needed for story purposes. I dont know about Sai being in or out of character, since we know little about him you have a bit more artistic freedom to mess with him. Sakura ...I can see it. She has grown up after all. I sure am not the same person that I was at 12 so why should she be? All I can say is its a hell of a plan and I look forward to more chapters.
person Valkyrie
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes!!! This story is genius. I really hope that you continue b/c EEEEEE!!! It fills me with joy! Sasuke's jealous! I hope sometime in the future to see him snap once Sakura pushes him far enough. Hot. Love this story. Update soon, please!
person Liz
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, that was good. I laughed alot. I love that someone who can actually write is writing a het-fiction that I want to read. These odd couple ones are good... but what happened to good old Sakura + any Konoha male (not counting Kakashi)? Don't get me wrong (if someone is reading this that loves that pairing) I don't have anything against them, but no one attempts anything else really. AND finally - thank you thank you thank you for writing this. It's awsome, and I cannot wait for another chapter. Sai is hawt. But Sasuke is ... hawt too (when he's not butt bumping Naruto in M/M fictions ;P which seems to be all he's getting on this site.)
person no name for now
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love Sai but he seems a little bit too bitchy here in my opinion but then again i don't like people dissing Sasuke. Other than that it's interesting for the moment. I'd like to see more of it.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your fic. It's so hilarious. I am pretty neutral towards Sai but you made like him now.. I think... Yes, It is very difficult to write about Sai since we don't know about him so much... Anyway, I really enjoyed it. Actually I am not really Sasuke/Sakura fan either but your fic is so fun to read. so Kudos to you! I am looking forward to reading new chapters so keep up writing!