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by kimbop

person me
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHGG!!! WHAT THE HELL!!!! WHY THE FUCK HAVNT YOU UPDATED IN FOORRREVVVERRR!!!! IV BEEN EXTREMELY PATIENT!!! PLEASE! PLEASE! IM ONNNNN MMMMYYYY KKNNNNEEEESSS!!!!
person me
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honestly, this is one of the most well written, thoroghly thought out, amazingly strategized stories i have ever read. Your vocabulary is amazing and the way you decribe everything in such a dignified manner(when its not already funny) is a welcomed change from the trash usually written on this site from some people. You should honestly continue with this story because i would consider it the biggest waste if you dont. Its just too good. PS-I love how you made Sasuke..not OOC at all and theres just something about him that makes your heart swoon..
person A TAD BIT UPSET
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHYYY!!!! WHY???!!!!! WHY WONT YOU UPDATE!?!?!?? NOOOOOO
person A TADBIT UPSET
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AND SUSUKE X SAKURA ALLLLLLL THE WAAAY!!!! DONT LISTEN TO THEM!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!
person I love you!
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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Update or suffer my wrath!
person Bekah
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I started reading this because I love your stories and I thought it would be a really good Sasuke/Sakura fic... I've fallen for Sai! x.x I really want her to end up with him. For some reason I feel Sasuke is undeserving of her. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to the new edtion of Make out paradise? Please update!
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SAI/SAKURA all the way baby! PLEASE let this be a sai/sakura pairing. There aren't enough of them out there. Plus the way you write him, I've totally fallen for him. Sasuke is a total asshole, he only wants Sakura once she's found another. That's bullshit. Plus think into the future. Sasuke will be back to his old ways leaving a lonly Sakura to be a house wife. And I feel under his gruff exterior Sai is a caring guy. See?! He's a million times better than Sasuke!! ^^ Please update and give us more!!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have you abandoned this? Nooo~~~!!! ;_; Come back! Don't leave us hangin'!
person GinaCat
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love this fic so much I hope you update soon I can't wait I love the Tension Sai/Sakura/Sas is awesome I love the way you make Sakura so diabolical(sp) YOU ROCK
person Uchiha_fangirl69
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! GRRRR! Update NOW! *whimpers and falls to the floor* I'm like addicted.........DON'T CUT ME OFF ALL COLD TURKEY!