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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has been one of the most entertaining and hillarious fanfics I've ever read. I was literally in tears at some of the things since they were so funny. With the triangle going on between, Sakura, Sasuke, and Sai is very intersting. With me, I really don't care who Sakura ends up with, for I like them both. Well I can't wait until the next chapter, and awesome job!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please update soon
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please update soon
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really fond of the "ex-ag-ger-ate" part! Made me all warm n' fuzzy inside! And Sasuke smiling when Naruto confirmed Sakura's loyalty... too cute. You're so talented at the scenes! And you know what I really like? The fact that everything stays in Sakura's POV. (With the exceptions of those small scenes at the end of this chapter w/ Naruto and Sasuke, and Hiruma and Kakashi) I mean, you could write it with Sakura being confused about what Sasuke would want after winning their second spar and then switching to a scene with him basically telling the readers what he wants, but that is so not as suspenceful! I like to keep guessing and you're really keeping me on my toes.
I feel so much sympathy for Sai.. I really hope he gets a happy ending. Which randomly reminds me, have you ever seen A Walk to Remember? I'll admit, it's a truely sappy film and if we didn't watch it in health class, it would be totally something I would never pick up at a video store. But, anyhoo, it's basically about how two people, boy and girl (duh), get paired up for some reason and the guy is totally not into the girl, thinks she's plain-jane and such. When they first pair up, the girl is all, "Promise me..that you won't fall in love with me." And of course, the guy thinks it's hillarious, but que sera-sera, he ends up totally in love with her. Sorry, it kinda remined me of this whole Sakura-Sai deal. And maybe I just wanted to type alot. -shifty glance-
Well, anyhoo, onward my dear writer! I await for an update with baited breath once more!
I feel so much sympathy for Sai.. I really hope he gets a happy ending. Which randomly reminds me, have you ever seen A Walk to Remember? I'll admit, it's a truely sappy film and if we didn't watch it in health class, it would be totally something I would never pick up at a video store. But, anyhoo, it's basically about how two people, boy and girl (duh), get paired up for some reason and the guy is totally not into the girl, thinks she's plain-jane and such. When they first pair up, the girl is all, "Promise me..that you won't fall in love with me." And of course, the guy thinks it's hillarious, but que sera-sera, he ends up totally in love with her. Sorry, it kinda remined me of this whole Sakura-Sai deal. And maybe I just wanted to type alot. -shifty glance-
Well, anyhoo, onward my dear writer! I await for an update with baited breath once more!
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please pleae please please please please please pleaase please please please please please update
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"ALL hail the Queen of SMUT!!" ::BOws reverently(sp?)::<< you know you really should not but yourself down saying you dont write good smut or things like that... ( you are too modest of your own writing.. you should flaunt it..) because in fact your smut was probably one of the best or probably is the best smut I have the pleasure of reading for a very long time (consider me a smut-fic- otaku..yes I've been all around the net in pursuit of good smut)... your writing is exceptional ... as Ron Weasely would say " Bloody Brilliant!!"...oh and if you do have the time..please update...but I hate to rush excellence..so take your lovely time
..your plot...its amazing...its funny.. all its like a good pot of surry with everything in it... in fact I'll let you on to something.. I skipped work just to read this fic of yours.. see how incessantly strong your power of persuasion is... man...man if I was a man.. I prob had a hard-on all day long... ::sighs perversely::
-Misery XP
..your plot...its amazing...its funny.. all its like a good pot of surry with everything in it... in fact I'll let you on to something.. I skipped work just to read this fic of yours.. see how incessantly strong your power of persuasion is... man...man if I was a man.. I prob had a hard-on all day long... ::sighs perversely::
-Misery XP
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I finally read all the chapters together because my sister was nagging me to do so. So what do I find? I LOVE SAI/SAKU!!! God is this good! I couldn't imagine in all my dreams that i would prefer the loud annoying Sai to Sasuke. You have made the character work in a fantastic manner and I hope you update fast. Yes Lily, you were right, I'm a junkie! Keep up the great work.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not one of them (those who want SasuSaku at first, then SaiSaku later). NEVER. SasuSaku ALL DA WAY!
Reason why readers are clamouring for Sai to get with Sakura is probably because you focus too much on the ra-ass bastard, and make him far less of a jerk than he is. Sasuke is like a distant runner-up in the triangle. Like there's all these dramatic moments with Sai's character development and the one in chapter 13 with the older couple, Sai is constantly there. Whereas for Sasuke's appearances, I can only think of the one where he took her home and watched her sleep. That's too little.
And WHY did you make Sakura almost kiss the JERK-FACE?!?!? She only thinks of him as a friend! Right?!
All the above, are the reasons why you readers most likely think this is s SaiSaku fic, thus the encouragement of Sai fans for you to pair them up.
Frankly, I believe Sakura could only see Sai as a Sasuke replacement AT THE MOST (though she clearly doesn't in the manga), and would only kiss him if she confused him with Sasuke. Like when she was piss-assed drunk.
Reason why readers are clamouring for Sai to get with Sakura is probably because you focus too much on the ra-ass bastard, and make him far less of a jerk than he is. Sasuke is like a distant runner-up in the triangle. Like there's all these dramatic moments with Sai's character development and the one in chapter 13 with the older couple, Sai is constantly there. Whereas for Sasuke's appearances, I can only think of the one where he took her home and watched her sleep. That's too little.
And WHY did you make Sakura almost kiss the JERK-FACE?!?!? She only thinks of him as a friend! Right?!
All the above, are the reasons why you readers most likely think this is s SaiSaku fic, thus the encouragement of Sai fans for you to pair them up.
Frankly, I believe Sakura could only see Sai as a Sasuke replacement AT THE MOST (though she clearly doesn't in the manga), and would only kiss him if she confused him with Sasuke. Like when she was piss-assed drunk.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please please please update
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please lease please please please please update