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for The Scheme

by kimbop

person Ari
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This story is wonderful! I love SasuSaku and I love SaiSaku, so please end this with whatever pairing you want! At the moment I'm hoping for SaiSaku, but everytime you create a new romantic scene between either of them I sway on my opinion. So if chap. 14 is SasuSaku I'll probably be hoping for a SasuSaku ending, and visa versa. Lol, anyways, great story! I'll be waiting for an update!
person Ari
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also, I must say, you are a creative genius with the insults and Kakashi excuses! The one about the dress and males flirting with him was hillarious!
person Hillary
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please update
person PrincessSweetSugar
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I just finished reading this story and I love it! I totally agree with you about all the stories being yaoi, lets get some het pairings in there! You're writing is simply beautiful, and I don't notice any mistakes so that's great! And the sexual tension between Sakura and Sai is so thick you can cut it with a knife. I really love how you formed them together and with Sasuke how you keep him in his quiet, very anti-social self but still manage him to play off well in your story.

Personally, though a Sakura-Sasuke pairing would be nice, I definitely want a Sai-Sakura pairing for this story! But you are the author and I can tell you that either way I will be really really happy!!

Keep on writing and update ASAP!

~PSweetS
person Hillary
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please update
person LilyDraken
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person t
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually review, but for this story I have to. I am really liking this story. The way that you are keeping us readers guessing about who Sakura is going to end up with. I feel for Sai, who seems to be falling in love. I also feel for Sakura,whose madcap scheme is going to end in hurt for one or more people involved.
person Rei
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe that was funny when sakura threatened them tehehe and how kakashii just appears and wonders what he missed this chapter was interesting!.... awwwww it seems as if its leaning towards sai/sakura pouts* i hope not i wanna see sakura end up with sasuke
person Hillary
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please pleasse please please please please please update
person So-kun
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I totally love this story!! It's awesome. But umm, when you wrote that part about the kids, it should be Onee-san because onii-san means big brother. I'm pretty sure you've already been informed about that but it's been bugging me for a while. :P I really like how you portrait the characters expecailly the interaction between Sai and Sakura. I wasn't a big Sai fan, I'm still not. But for this story, I'm totally in his corner! I can't wait to read more!