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by kimbop

person Sakura
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol Miroku and sango !
Love this story =D
person L-
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. the last chapter got us all a bit confused though. is she inlove with both of the guys now?
Oh wellz.. I guess we just have to wait and see where this road will go.
Keep it coming!
Li-z.
person LaneyC
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're awesome and I love you. xDDD Still loving the dynamics between Sai and Sakura. They certainly put "affection" on a whole nother level. (Get the feeling the guy's gonna get ripped to shreds though. I already feel sympathy for him.)


By the way I loved Naruto in this Chapter. He's just so... undescribable. Can't wait to see what kind of dysfunctional Hokage he would make. Heh. I've gotta say he's my favorite in your characterization.

And I do say keep them coming! I haven't been this hooked on a fanfiction since ''Loophole''!



person jennjennr
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LAMO this is probably my favorite chapter of this story! i love the interactions with all the characters...the wit i love it i wish i had half the wit that sai/sakura/ you have. i can't wait till you continue this i love it so much! ^_^
person Aya
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! This chapter kicked ass! I totally can't wait to see Kakashi's reaction after reading the lasted volume of his book. Also the character interactions and devlopment is just mind blowing. I can't wait for the next chapter! And don't worry Sai is really in character from what I can tell. ^__^
person Hillary
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please update
person pippins_song
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love youuuuuuuu. I love this story as well. I'm so happy you update so religiously. ^_^ Please continue, as always
person Rei
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww its going to be sai or sasuke now not sasuke and sakura all the way? i hope its sasuke still T-T i tend to stick to one couple sai's cool an all but i rather have it sasuke and sakura! hehe great chapter looking forward to the next one
person Hillary
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please update
person LaneyC
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, looks like Sakura's not the only one doing the manipulating. I admit I was actually a Sai supporter from the start, while fully expecting this to be Sasusaku. And now I see you've made some people do a 180 on their opinions of him. Cool.

I also find it strangely funny that while you are making Sai look good, Kishimoto in turn is making a point of him looking more like a trashy asshole. *see 292, but I still love the guy*

Anyways this story is proof for the reason I prefer SaiSaku over Sasusaku, whatever the outcome may be.