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by kimbop

person Hillary
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plase please update
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I love your writing style.
You had me glued to the computer. I just couldn't leave untill I finished reading. lol
Which is bad considering I have a portfolio review to prepare for. ::sighs::
Thanks for such a great read. I can't wait for the next update.
person ArishaGinkaze
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ONLY FIVE MORE CHAPTERS?!??! awwwwwwwwww. that will be a sad day for me. Damn you. You've made it so that I want her to get with both of them! hehe but i suppose that's not really possible because I dont think either of them would be pleased about that haha. Update soon, i cant wait!
person Lilydraken
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It's phenomenal! I can't wait to see where you go with this! I'm on the edge of my seat. And so desperately torn between Sai and Sasuke. I'm such a Sasuke fan, but your Sai is so sweet in his own way... Gaahhhh!
person EF
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, long-time reader, first-time reviewer... (:

I get up early each morning to see if you've updated. Some days you do, and those are great days indeed. And the days you don't, I just remind myself that a spankin' new chapter will be there soon. You've yet to disapoint and I doubt you ever will! This story is amazing and I would totally bang this new vixen Sakura. But, of course, I want one of our raven-haired fellows to have that privilage. Personally, I like both, so either/or is fine with me. (Are you sure they can't share?)

Poor Sai! What a fate- it seems he's fallen for his best friend! And that Sasuke, what is the favor he wants!? I'm dying inside, but the suspence is so worth it. And hmmm, will one of our boys get a hold of that certain book staring the lovely Haruno? And what of Kakashi! ...urk.

Ahem, anyhoo.. Hey! "Fat Bastard"! Never thought I'd hear that name again! I was at a Christmas party and they had a bottle of "Fat Bastard" wine, because they liked the name. Anyways, I will await with baited breath for the new chapter and I wish the best of luck in whatever you do!
person jennjennr
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm am i fickel? i don't remember...i think i was for sai, but i might not have been, i never remember things. hmm yeah i liked it...but i missed sai. and yeah ...i liked how you made sasuke less of a dick, it needed to be done, he's kinda pissing me off in general, and people either seem to write him in a totally oc way of they make him a dick, i really like the fact that you made the transition natural. i still love it...but this chapter seems to be missing something... i don't know what but something... maybe it the humor like you said oh well i still love it.
person Aya
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wo0t!! Yet another great chapter! I absolutely loved it. Too bad Sakura can't have both men... *sigh* Only in dreams, ne?
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well duh it'll be sai or sasuke! update soon! and don't worry about the japanese, but if you need just say jump, i'll totally be like how high! but everyone gets what you mean, really no matter...
person Caylintz
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omfg this chapter made me sqee.. i congradulate you on your perfect writing of Sasuke, one would expect him sitting by Sakura's bedside to be totally ooc, but strangely it wasn't the case.

And just to shout out inbetween all of the rabid Sai/Saku fans suddenly taking over the place, if Sakura ends up with Sai then you'll make me cry! I still love the sasusaku even when everyone is losing their faith! T____T
person Hillary
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ya ya ya you updated im so happy!!! I was kinda hopeing this was going to be a threesome but if it has to be only one i pick sai