rate_review Reviews

Wow. I am so surprised to find such a good story on affnet. I mean, granted, there are SOME good ones, but not usually. I REALLY like this a lot. Your Sakura is <3OMG and your Sasuke is so canon. I love it!

Oh my GOSH! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am hooked! You said that some people on here don't like you but pease do not stop with your story! I am in love with Sai and so mad because he seems to be falling for Sakura and she's totally gone over Sasuke!WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhh! But you really are an excellent writer!

Ok, um, wow. You are cruel. For the record I hope you let Sai get her. It's a nice ending, scheming continuously to win one man, and then ending up falling for another. Besides that, Sai is a more developed charater here. Also, Sai is falling for Sakura, the real Sakura, and Sasuke just knows the fake Sakura. So his love is more genuine. In addition, Sasuke is being tricked, and Sai well... I don't know. The biggest reason though, was the end of chapter 11. Dude, after that sort of hurt he deserves the girl. Anyway, I really like this story, and the way you portray the characters. Thanks for writing it.

oh wonderful story!!! normally I'm a big SasuSaku fan, but while reading your story I'm changing my mind XD Sai is greatly described here; I don't know his character as he only recently appeared and I haven't seen the newest chapter yet, but I think your version of him is highly possible ;] I feel so sorry for him... Sasuke's a realy ice-cude, GO SAI!! :D
once again, story is just great! I love it sooo much~!!!!
(sorry for possible mistakes, but English is not my first language).

Soo, you tend to see underneath the underneath huh... Lol. What I wanted to say is that you tend to give fan-girls another perspective of 'S' men,
Sasuke and Sai, who are not actually morons runnin low on testosterone, but capable of some feelings. I actually like Sai and Sakura pairing. I will do a
fanart for you work, okay?
What's your email? I'll send it to you!
-mvp

*sigh* Poor Sai! I really feel horrible for him....I mean, he actually is starting to have emotions and what not for sakura and all her blind eyes could see is that stupid sasuke!! Grr....I loved this chapter nonetheless,buuuttt are you sure you want this to be a sasusaku, cause in my opinion i think that sakusai would work better....I really feel fro him.....*curses sasuke* lol
Great fic...

wah poor sai! he's starting to like sakura! thats amasing! ok thats exactly what i hoped for so now i'm just enumorating upon my happiness in the fact that it came true! haha i guess its like a gloat ^_^. i love your bar scenes, keep um coming! hmm yes your right about the whole sakura thing, and by the way i really like how you've devloped her character, it great, i think this is how she should really be, strong cuse yeah she's a ninja, but she's also a female, and face it we have emotions, lots of crazy ones we don't even want, and this is a good synthisis of the two.

i really enjoyed the udpate. after reading the chapters, i'm kind of into Sai/Sakura now too. i don't know where you'll lead us to but i can't wait for more =)

update soon again please!

well, it looks like it's straying to a sai/sakura thing. too bad, but still a good story. how about giving sasuke a girl all over him? ya know, to see how sakura would handle some competition. just a suggestion.

ahhhh yea i know i KNOW, your fucking this donkey and we need
to just sit back and enjoy the ride

but i cant help but want sakura to get together with Sai...

IN FACT this story is what inspired me to write Ink Me
because i really did want them to get together and i
thought your interpretation of them was wonderful, to the
point where i just had to put it to words.

but i also want her to have sasuke just because i think...well
lets just say you write a good story.

ive gotten alot of flak for my interpretation of Sai myself, but i have
also gotten alot of good reviews. And you have to say to people "While i may be writing him in
a way you find contradictory which is just a manner of opinion, YOU dont really know
enough about him EITHER to tell me im wrong."