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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hot sex scene!!! This is a great story line, please continue... I have to know what happens to Sakura!
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting. I like how you made Sakura strong and Gaara a good guy. My only complaint is the Naruto and Sasuke got together too easily. There should have been a bit more hostility between them. Other than that, and it's been over a year since you updated, it's a great fic.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update anytime soon? :\ i want to read more!!! and i loved the Lemon chapter, it was sooooooo amazing! :D
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! When are you going to update this fanfic? :D i want to read more. this one's great ^^
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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg I just died and went to hentai heaven, that was sooo totally hot, I am speechless, all I can say is that was sooooooooo totally worth the wait...*fans self* wow...keep up the good work, which I could say more but am still in hentai heaven shock...lol..huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Long time no read. It's good to hear from you :-)
So, what was Naruto serving for dinner? Pheromons with some Viagra mixed in? Whatever it was I want it too! :D
Though the chapter was great there is one small logical mistake in there. Naruto tells Sasuke that he has taken the guest room but was cleaning Sasukes room occasionally. When he went upstairs to tell Sasuke that dinner is ready you write, that Naruto has never been in this room before or never has seen it. How has he managed to clean the room? "Clean-up-no-jitsu"? ;)
Anyway, that's nothing crucial.
Good luck for your finals, I keep my fingers crossed for you,
Nathaniel
So, what was Naruto serving for dinner? Pheromons with some Viagra mixed in? Whatever it was I want it too! :D
Though the chapter was great there is one small logical mistake in there. Naruto tells Sasuke that he has taken the guest room but was cleaning Sasukes room occasionally. When he went upstairs to tell Sasuke that dinner is ready you write, that Naruto has never been in this room before or never has seen it. How has he managed to clean the room? "Clean-up-no-jitsu"? ;)
Anyway, that's nothing crucial.
Good luck for your finals, I keep my fingers crossed for you,
Nathaniel
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May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story; it feels like it is going to be good, but there is something that has been bothering me since I read chapter three. Kankuro seems out of character and the way you wrote the interaction between Gaara and Kankuro it's like they aren't even related. I don't want to sound mean, but do you know that Kankuro is Gaara's brother?
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May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bunni is happy~ ^^ Bunta-san deserves many reviews!! Very visualistic wording too.. oo *blushes* It's definately worth the wait dakara daijoubu bunta-san!! *glomps* I shall give bunta-san dango for the lemon~!! OO *nods and gives ten plates of dango to bunta-san* Ja, zutto gambatte bunta-san!! Keep up the brilliant work~ ^^
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May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
New chapter, YAY!!!! I needed a good something to read to make up for this crappy week. Such a bad bad week, but your story helps make up for it. Nice new chapter, their issues haven't been completely resolved but it's definitely a nice step in that direction:D I can't really come up with anything else, been up most of the night and I'm a bit out of it. Good luck on moving out, I remember when I had to do it, it was always such trouble. And before I end this I wanted to ask if you got my email, hotmail has been going funky on me lately and I wanted to make sure it got through.